Kim Van Breda Poet Rhyme

God Sees You

“GOD SEES YOU”

Sometimes it feels like God doesn’t really concern Himself with me
Whilst in fact every footstep He can foresee
He knows precisely the hairs on my head
AWare of every moment, everything about me instead

He made and formed my heart deep within
Creating affectionate satisfaction under my skin
Shaping each person unique in their ways
His plan for my future forever prevails

He breathed a word and stars popped out
Skies formed— gently commanded without a shout
If this- His breathtaking Supremacy be true
I have Faith - He universally acknowledges—a perfect view

(Inspired by Psalm 33)


Copyright© April 2013—Kim van Breda

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Patrick Nigros May 21, 2013 at 8:54 AM beautiful poem. AMEN.

John Posey May 5, 2013 at 3:57 AM And I'm sure He smiled while reading this... The discovery of this little gem among your poetic jewelry delights the heart of this old wordsmith.... Love ya.... Jake Kim Van Breda May 5, 2013 at 7:36 AM As a Christian, I always feel that God expects me to use my writing to express my love for Him.. great way to spread the Word. Thanks Jake... comments much appreciated.

Timothy Hicks April 29, 2013 at 12:55 AM Beautiful Kim! The last stanza was my favorite with the celestial images. Despite how incredible the earth is it's amazing to me how it is but a tiny spec compared to the rest of the galaxy. God's creativity is astounding!

Isaiah Zerbst April 27, 2013 at 7:26 AM Such a beautiful way to express the feelings here! It seems like every poem based from the Bible is excellent. What an awesome God He is! ~Thanks and more thanks for your dear comments.

Anne-Lise Andresen April 24, 2013 at 7:22 AM Bless you, Kim .... lovely. - Have a great day! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Juli- Michelle April 23, 2013 at 8:52 PM It's a sign of a poet that can be inspired by their scripture reading. I do the same, sometimes I will read a verse and have to stop and write the whole poem down before I lose it... maybe that's just me though. Nonetheless, I enjoyed this and I felt the love you have for your faith.

Gordon Mcconnell April 23, 2013 at 9:04 AM lovely write, really inspirational as psalm 33 does to one. God bless you, Gordon