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God Sees Every Poem You Write

Your words fly through the clouds Our poetry lands on God’s auspicious lap. Is it truly laudable and magnificent… or.. To His face, do you give God a slap? Do you words raise souls to dwell on beauty. Or drag souls down to hell ,to not glow? But shine with dark, lowlife Satanic horns. And comments that applaud evil’s glow? Inspired by Robert Hinshaw Faithful Friend Poet of Highest Integrity 7/14/2023
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Ricci Avatar
July 21, 2023 at 2:55 AM
Good Morning Pangie. Hi. Yes, God sees every poem every word be it positive or negative. You wrote with grace and truth. May this day find you well Pangie. Have a wonderful morning and weekend too. Blessings always (smile) PS - This was a wonderful way to start the day.
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July 21, 2023 at 2:40 PM
Day going well, so far. We can raise souls or have them ponder meaningless things.as if the media, already clouds their minds with darkness and fore bing. If we have time, to touch a few souls in wonderfiul. With meaningful comments. Not primary adjectives. Let our Muses enlighten us in both comments and replies. To touch their haearts,so grateful to you, Lisa, for explains how this touched off…Panagiota
Lindley Avatar
July 19, 2023 at 12:06 PM
My friend your words ring quite true. Humanity operates on a basic instinct which is in league with darkness, conceit and lying, imho. A poet should always write from heart and soul. Your poem speaks truth, Added to my fav list. God bless.
Romios Avatar
July 19, 2023 at 12:46 PM
The world in quite evil Robert, otherwise we would never be is such bad shape. But MAN still thinks he can create world peace? They can’t even stop the war in the Ukraine. Chinese militants are entering the USA via the border and WWIii will be on American land, no border= no country. Now we have cases of malaria?And many Americans hate it here, Try Venezuela. You are a blessing in my life. Thank you for the.”F”.PR
Hind Avatar
July 18, 2023 at 11:25 AM
Very thought-provoking...
Romios Avatar
July 19, 2023 at 12:37 PM
Have a good week Paige! Thank you.
Fisher Avatar
July 16, 2023 at 4:24 PM
This has so much passion behind the words, and it resonates so well. It makes one think before they leap!
Romios Avatar
July 17, 2023 at 1:49 AM
Must say, David, always a joy to hear from you, oh yes, this is quite passionate. Sometimes I want to post just meaningless stuff and drop personal feelings. But we are who we are. I know friends will read me no matter what. It’s been insufferably steamy where I live so I have posted little. Thank you, Panagiota
Wolf Avatar
July 15, 2023 at 9:13 PM
Well, it's true. Of course, I myself told him to believe only half of what he sees (and none of what he hears). ~ God's Counselor, gw
Romios Avatar
July 15, 2023 at 9:27 PM
Thank you G. Unfortunately, evil is crushing good like a turnip More counseling is needed.)) Thank you Pangie
Eagle Avatar
July 15, 2023 at 12:09 PM
An amazing poem. Great creativity! Always a joy to read your work.
Romios Avatar
July 15, 2023 at 2:58 PM
Elena! Thank you for commenting and suppirt. Much appreciated. From mt heart, Pangie
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July 15, 2023 at 8:29 AM
love and prayers sent your way, For every kind of beasts, and of birds, and of serpents, and of things in the sea, is tamed, and hath been tamed of mankind: but the tongue can no man tame; it is an unruly evil, full of deadly poison. Therewith bless we God, even the Father; and therewith curse we men, which are made after the similitude of God. Out of the same mouth proceedeth blessing and cursing. My brethren, these things ought not so to be. James 3:7?-?10 KJV Only Christ can tame the tongue
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July 16, 2023 at 11:15 PM
Amen Stephen.'
Romios Avatar
July 15, 2023 at 10:43 AM
Thank you, dear Stephen. Your wisdom from the Word says it all. A tongue or pen with no honor to God .pens anything. And the poets.cheer? God is not dead. He sees what we do. I can only pray for the lost souls. Animals don’t March to kill their young. Only humans do? Wonderful quote.Panagiota
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July 15, 2023 at 6:38 AM
Thanks, Pangie - very enlightening!
Romios Avatar
July 15, 2023 at 7:30 AM
Hi Bob, notice how quiet it i is, in responses? I actually expected that.I do not write about climate change. I write about being authentic. And a salute to those poets.who make us better people and not appeal to the worst in us, but the best in us! You’re welcome for twas you who got me thinking. Pangie.
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