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God Said Oops

Back of the church in the dusty pews in a passing whisper God said "OOPS"... I'm sure he said it with no "amen" then I heard God say "OOPS" again. I sit in the back near the too heavy door cuz when I sleep I tend to snore 'neath the fire and brimstone of a "God" based fear that's when I felt Him drawing near edging closer through the dust the lonely savior of shalt nots and musts. He whispered coldly At the too thick books "They left out the parts where God said "OOPS". John G. Lawless 3/22/2020

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Date: 3/27/2020 9:02:00 AM
I really enjoyed this piece. Thanks for the chuckle. I hope he didn't say Oops when He made me.
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Date: 3/24/2020 9:23:00 PM
Well written. Love this poem. JL. Kelli
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Date: 3/24/2020 6:05:00 PM
Nice...enjoyed the read...church door are now closed....oops...for 10 or less sinners...
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Date: 3/24/2020 1:48:00 PM
Oh, John, this is quite delightful. I think of the movie "O God" when George Burns, as God, quips about making the pit in the avocado too big! Thank you for the laugh, and the insight, under our grey skies of pandemic.
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