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God Must Be Disappointed In Us

Oft' I've pondered if when God peers down upon this His own Creation, And sees this blue marble heading for calamity with each day's rotation, That He must shake His head and weep at the chaos humanity hath wrought, Wondering why folks can't abide by The Golden Rule His Son once taught! Peoples who cry out for freedom are crushed 'neath wicked tyrants' heels, While autocrats amass vast fortunes, ignoring the impoverished folks' appeals! He must be appalled that there are even some religions that foster strife; That there are those who plot evil and don't respect the sanctity of life! He must look with dismay at the lack of stewardship and the mess we've made, Of His once pristine orb that we've managed to leave so polluted and frayed! His magnificent forests and waters aren't immune from mankind's rapacious greed. We've harvested their bounty and ravaged resources without regard to need! Old men plot and the very young die carrying out their nefarious schemes. All too young they die, never having the opportunity to realize their dreams. God must wonder why there is so much mayhem and lack of brotherhood, Among folks of diverse races and creeds even in their own neighborhood! He must at times consider hurling this orb of His into the ebon void of space, And begin genesis anew since we persist in certain doom at a steady pace! Thankfully, we have a merciful God Who will sort things out for us along the way, But it might be well to concoct a plausible story to tell Him on Judgement Day! Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired © All Rights Reserved

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Date: 9/5/2011 1:02:00 PM
We can run but we can't hide and like all judges He will be filled with anger if He catches us lying to Him. Don't think I want to add that to the list of things He already has against me. ;) Great job here my friend. God Bless, JB
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Date: 8/29/2011 10:58:00 PM
Bob H., a very interesting poem and thought... I know he will enjoy you on any day... not just judgement day... Really loved this poem,..p.d.
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Date: 8/29/2011 10:02:00 PM
Dear Bob, Very powerful message, and another magnificent write from your pen. Many excuses will surely be made on the Day of Judgment. God have mercy on all of us. Love, Glenna
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Date: 8/28/2011 9:36:00 PM
Signs of the times spoken so well in rhymes! A powerful statement of the sordid age we are living in. An amazing verse as always.
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Date: 8/28/2011 9:27:00 PM
very nicely rhymed, robert, this message of yours to mankind. Too bad it won't be heeded! But the last line was quite clever in any event!
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Date: 8/28/2011 9:22:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your work!!
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Date: 8/28/2011 7:15:00 PM
the most spectacular piece ever Bob and I say your title at least once a week out loud about how disappointed God must be with all of us luv.. I think it as well... great rhyme as always but more important great message for all who read.. making this one of my favs today luv..
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Date: 8/28/2011 6:46:00 PM
truly a wonderful poem!!!!!!!enjoyed the read!! ---Lori
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Date: 8/28/2011 6:37:00 PM
Through the history of mankind, God has looked down and had to shake his head, so many times he could have "hurled the ord" and did not because he never gives up on mankind, wonderful write, wonderful poem, wonderful message, love constance
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Date: 8/28/2011 6:26:00 PM
A very clear message to those politicians and a thankful note for the merciful God, Bob
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Date: 8/28/2011 6:17:00 PM
What an outstanding and inspiring piece of rhyme Robert! You've detailed the disasters and hypocracies of mankind so vivid and effective as a professor would teach a lesson to his students!
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Date: 8/28/2011 6:15:00 PM
He sure must be very disappointed in us Bob, and yet he tend to give us chance upon chance to do the right thing and make the write choices.. I love how you ended this stunning piece off btw.. Hope your Sunday is a blessed one ;) love Wilma
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Date: 8/28/2011 5:47:00 PM
Indeed, I believe He would be disappointed by the current state of world affairs, Bob. As you say so poignantly in the fourth verse, the young are sent to war while the old men (politicians) plot out how to seek revenge or create chaos. Yes, God is merciful, but some things seem unforgivable to me. Guess we won't know how it's all sorted out until Judgement Day. Powerful poem! Love, Carolyn
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