God Knows Where I Am

Opening and closing my eyes. Oh, Wow such a Bright light.
 
Seeing two of God Creations overflowing with tears and smiles. 

“You two know Who I AM!”

Human beings changing me, carrying me, feeding me, grooming me, teaching me, finally they Molded me right. 

“Hmmm… Do you Really know Who I AM?”

Learning with you, making friends with you, playing with you, working with you, exploring with you, enjoying life with you, and even Created a new life with you.

“Seriously, Who Am I?”

Smiling. Company all around. “Hello there!” Dancing. Being goofy. “Hahahaha!” Hallucinating. “Oh no, no, no, NO!” “What is that?” Confused. “I want to be alone.”; “No, please don’t leave me!”; “Get away from me.”; “Who is that chasing me!” Felt a Pinch. “Ouch, that hurt!” Screaming, “Why, Why, why, why!” Eyes slowly closing. Body weakening. Dreaming. You deserve to be Happy, excited, grateful, content, accepted, saved, treasured, and at peace. Grasping the noble power of speech. Eyes slowly opening. All alone. Feeling, miserable, weary, terrified, anxious, & so irate. “Ahhhh!” Inside devotions. Self-Warrior.

“Where Am I?”

Free-Prisoner! Visualizing. Prayers! Excited; an empty home. Stomach rumbles. Prayers! Grateful; apples everywhere. Thinking. Prayers! Content; able to be a writer. “I am Not Alone!” Prayers! Accepted; Believer of God.  ”It’s so cold.” Body deteriorating. Prayed. Prayed. Floated Soul. Prayers!

“Do you Know Where I Am?”

“Where AM I?” Covering mouth. Giggling. “HELLO, GOD KNOWS WHERE I AM!” Captured. Grasped by the Noble Power. In High Spirits. “I AM Protected by my Lord and Savior!” Finally, At Peace; MySelf-War ended. “NOW YOU ALL KNOW WHERE I AM.” My body is Treasured; you finally discovered me. Entreating God Children. "Because within me is Peace; Now Shall be Peace within You ALL!"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 6/22/2017 6:54:00 PM
Good work Jasmin. Congrats on your placement.
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Date: 6/13/2017 10:46:00 AM
Bravo Jasmin, you truly captured a confused mind in a strange world.
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Date: 6/11/2017 8:35:00 PM
This one went to the mind, and heart of one who is desperate to be free of the pain. We as readers can see the thought and time spent to write this amazing poem. Well done, jasmin
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