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God Is Working To Subtly Lift Him

lost traveling quite rapidly downstream


he has released all but one final dream


hope has been overshadowed by despair


rejuvenation is beyond repair?


empathetic earth angel extends bridge


leans over and pulls him up to the ridge


depression is not easily sated


his emotions terribly inflated


he is surely sad and fully adrift


of course God is working to subtly lift


sweet angel with her extremely wise tools


breaks down his barriers, rewrites his rules


she nurtures him back to a healthy way

imagination remembers to play 

Written 5-15-2020
Contest: Bridge Over Troubled Waters
Sponsor: John Hamilton
Checked syllables with www.howmanysyllables.com

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 5/15/2020 7:07:00 AM
Awesome write. I hope you win. Love to you always, Gina
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/15/2020 7:28:00 PM
Thank you Regina. I was glad to have a reason to get outside of my usual genre.

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