Rama Balasubramanian Poet Alliteration

God Is My Best Friend

God is forever my first and only friend
Frankly I share all my feelings with him with  fervour
I fight with him for every fault I find in his creation 
Forever forgiving my faults and failings, he is foremost for me
Full faith with I have in him filled with absolute confidence
I acknowledge father works fervently for the betterment of his family 
Filled with bliss I fervently praise him forever
Filled with divine love I wish to faithfully serve him forever
I fantasize a fulfilling life with him full of joy in future

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Beata Agustin September 30, 2020 at 5:10 AM Congrats. Thanks for sharing the joy of having a sweet relationship with God through this muse of yours. Your first and last lines specially delight me. God bless you. Rama Balasubramanian October 1, 2020 at 11:12 AM Thanks. Your contests are most wonderful as they relate to the divine. I enjoy all of them. They make me happier. God bless you. Take care. Warm regards, Rama

Sam Kauffman September 29, 2020 at 12:14 PM As one who raises clouds of dust in my relationship with God, I so appreciate your honesty Rama. And, it is comforting to know that God listens as my friend. Congratulations on your winning placement. Blessings! Rama Balasubramanian October 1, 2020 at 11:15 AM Thanks. Truthful account of my relationship with God. You too make him your best friend. God I feel wants our love more than respect. Take care. Warm regards, Rama

Eve Roper September 13, 2020 at 9:11 PM Well said, Rama, life with God a blessing. Rama Balasubramanian September 14, 2020 at 3:37 AM Thanks and true indeed a blessing.:) Take care. Warm regards, Rama