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God Is Good-El

the old moon smiles from the sky
the leaves slowly dancing cry
golden fairies kiss the earth
springs of water, a new birth
I sat there and understood
God is loving, God is good
the old moon smiles from the sky

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Christuraj Alex

July 31, 2021 at 4:45 AM

This is a very beautiful work. Congratulations on your placement!

Marius Alexandru

July 31, 2021 at 12:14 PM

thank you very much

Beata Agustin

July 24, 2021 at 4:44 AM

Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.

Marius Alexandru

July 28, 2021 at 11:55 AM

thank you and God bless you too

Line Gauthier

July 19, 2021 at 2:00 AM

Beautiful, Marius ~ (marked as a 'haiku' but looks like a 'rhyme' to me)

Marius Alexandru

July 19, 2021 at 1:45 PM

Thanks. I know. The poet that hosts a contest I entered this poem in, invented a new form, but because it is not yet on the site as a new form he suggested entering the poem I created in his new form as a haiku to be able to post it. (notice the EL in the title too) https://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry/contests/elemental_14429