God Is Born

A virgin has sired 
        forth God,the sheep praying Him,
Earth racing for Him.

Those not among the sheep
Will hurl a sharp spear at Him.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Docherty Avatar
November 25, 2010 at 11:18 PM
oooohh, I like this one with subtle power beneath... Nicely done!
Palli Avatar
November 14, 2010 at 1:29 AM
Son of God born for us! Glad you're a sheep
Hickman Avatar
November 10, 2010 at 6:48 PM
you have Soup Mail,,Blessings..Cecil
Hickman Avatar
November 10, 2010 at 6:46 PM
truly apowerful message within this and obviously honestly honest too,,,Blessings..Cecil
Devonshire Avatar
November 10, 2010 at 9:50 AM
Oooh, what a poignant and powerful ending you have to this nativity scene, Honesty! Excellent tanka for my favorites! Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
November 10, 2010 at 6:27 AM
It's quite touchy and full of faith Tanka, Honesty
Onclaud Avatar
November 10, 2010 at 4:13 AM
wonderful sublime piece! lovely.. warmest,nette
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