God In Ruins

A great man once stated, 
"A man is god in ruins."
I took this to heart
scribbled it on papyrus.

and put it in the cradling hands of Poseidon.
And thought to myself, 

"If someone reads this and gives it back to Neptune
How epic it would become."
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Kendrick Avatar
December 29, 2009 at 2:12 PM
Interesting thoughts put to pen. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
Mason Avatar
December 29, 2009 at 12:20 PM
Who was the man? I've been reading a lot of the Stoic, Marcus Aurelius and seems like it was him or one of his contemporaries ... they all said all the great stuff ... smile ... thanks for bringing your writing to PoetrySoup, Peter and I hope to read a lot more from you !!
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