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God Help Me

My God Why have you forsaken me Life is too hard The world is too big The Devil, he is a crafty fellow I keep stumbling over self-will Please help me 10/18/15

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Date: 10/19/2015 7:18:00 AM
Ahh, that self will thing, that's the catcher. It puts the responsibility on each persons shoulder, what a burden? But in the end a choice is a choice and we all know right from wrong. As you said in another poem, we all make mistakes. Deep write, Kiley, simple but very thought provoking as you can see from my comment.
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