God Help Me

My God 
Why have you forsaken me 
Life is too hard 
The world is too big 
The Devil, he is a crafty fellow 
I keep stumbling over self-will 
Please help me 
10/18/15
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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October 19, 2015 at 7:18 AM
Ahh, that self will thing, that's the catcher. It puts the responsibility on each persons shoulder, what a burden? But in the end a choice is a choice and we all know right from wrong. As you said in another poem, we all make mistakes. Deep write, Kiley, simple but very thought provoking as you can see from my comment.
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