God Forgives

God forgives me, why can't you?


please give me a moment of your time

to look beneath my surface

from the depth inside

at who i really am
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Agustin Avatar
November 4, 2023 at 8:08 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Croft Avatar
November 4, 2023 at 12:23 PM
Thank you
Palli Avatar
February 6, 2011 at 10:13 AM
Can feel the hurt!
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