Unseeking Seeker Poet Rondeau

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God Fills the Blanks

God fills the blanks of unvoiced fear,
since each tremor to Him is known
and in His womb the thoughts we’ve sown
borne by ego, in time appear,
which if we allow God to steer,
there’s nothing we then call our own ~
God fills the blanks.

If heart’s pure, we feel bliss beats spear
form; rapture that’s from God on loan,
blossoming as lotus full blown.
When lower mind doth disappear, 
God fills the blanks.

12-December-2022

Rondine

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Beata Agustin December 12, 2022 at 8:41 AM Thanks for sharing this inspirational muse of yours. Thanks likewise for my placement in your recently-judged contest. God bless you. Unseeking Seeker December 12, 2022 at 5:43 PM Thanks for dropping by, Beata ~ happy you enjoyed

Sara Kendrick December 12, 2022 at 2:56 AM Enjoyed reading this Rondine. I tried writing several of these. They are not so easy to write. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara Unseeking Seeker December 12, 2022 at 5:57 AM An abbreviated Rondeau with the 8 syllable per line rule.

Victor Buhagiar December 12, 2022 at 1:04 AM Very spiritual. God will help all. Unseeking Seeker December 12, 2022 at 5:56 AM Always, if heart be pure