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God fills the blanks of unvoiced fear, since each tremor to Him is known and in His womb the thoughts we’ve sown borne by ego, in time appear, which if we allow God to steer, there’s nothing we then call our own ~ God fills the blanks. If heart’s pure, we feel bliss beats spear form; rapture that’s from God on loan, blossoming as lotus full blown. When lower mind doth disappear, God fills the blanks. 12-December-2022 Rondine

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Date: 12/12/2022 8:41:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this inspirational muse of yours. Thanks likewise for my placement in your recently-judged contest. God bless you.
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Date: 12/12/2022 5:43:00 PM
Thanks for dropping by, Beata ~ happy you enjoyed
Date: 12/12/2022 2:56:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this Rondine. I tried writing several of these. They are not so easy to write. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 12/12/2022 5:57:00 AM
An abbreviated Rondeau with the 8 syllable per line rule.
Date: 12/12/2022 1:04:00 AM
Very spiritual. God will help all.
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Date: 12/12/2022 5:56:00 AM
Always, if heart be pure

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