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This poem is written with all the inspirations of Our Loving Almighty God

God Bursts Everywhere

My heart is filled with joy and thanksgiving,
When I wake up in the morning sunshine;
What a splendid and wonderful feeling, 
When I see you all my friends and love of mine.
Through the beauty of nature and surrounding,
And in you, I always feel His Love Divine.
God bursts everywhere in joys or in pain,
He's omnipresent in air we breathe in.



Dec. 30, 2013  10.20 pm


My first try of Ottava Rima poem. 

Second Place
Contest: God Bursts Everywhere
Judged: 1/8/14
Sponsor: Poet Dr. Ram Mehta


This poem is dedicated to all of you my dear poet friends. Happy New Year 2014!

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Farhana Akter

Date: 5/19/2014 12:31:00 PM

Good like it

Joe Maverick

Date: 1/12/2014 6:19:00 PM

Hello Leonora, hope this did well in the contest; Good thoughts here..' take care Joe..)

Stacey Brown

Date: 1/8/2014 7:52:00 AM

very good write! congrats on this win!

Roger Horsch

Date: 1/8/2014 7:40:00 AM

This is such a wonderful poem Leonora, congrats on your win.....Hugs......Roger

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/8/2014 1:34:00 AM

Thanks for the entry and congratulations on fine win. All the best for the year 2014 ,Leo

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/4/2014 1:26:00 AM

I've seen how happy you are, your energy burst with light, ... Leo, my sweet sis... I am glad I can swim in the air I breath, thick and thin... God, is Divine.... A blessing poem, my loving sis.... going to bed..Thank you for the phone call,,,, PD

Len Gasun
Date: 1/4/2014 2:30:00 AM

Thank u for stopping by my dearest sis! I wish you all the best. Sending my loving hugs, smiles, kisses w/ prayers to u & your family. Good night. Sleep well & sweet dreams.

Saanvi Dua

Date: 12/31/2013 4:35:00 AM

Happy New Year , Leonara !! Do tell me your plans for New Year ! May this year bring lots of love , blessings , and fulfill many wishes and yes , lots of HAPPINESS !!! A wonderful write !! Love and smiles , Saanvi :))

Len Gasun
Date: 1/4/2014 2:31:00 AM

Thank u so much my dear friend Saanvi. Wishing you & your family all the best as well. Big hugs!

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 12/31/2013 3:46:00 AM

Superb poem before the end of 2013. clap clap clap!!! like it..Happy New Year my dear friend Leonora...hugs from me to you...mwuah!! :)

Len Gasun
Date: 1/4/2014 2:32:00 AM

Thanks for the nice comments and the round of applause my dear friend Maria.;))))))But I still need a confirmation if I did right with this experimented poem of mine;)) Hugs & kisses!

Russell Sivey

Date: 12/30/2013 4:37:00 PM

This is such a beautiful and enlightening write my friend! You always have a pleasantness about you within your awesome poems! You are such a wonderful friend here on the Soup! What a brilliant piece this truly is, Great Work!!

Len Gasun
Date: 1/4/2014 2:33:00 AM

Thank u so much again for the very inspiring comments my dear friend Russell.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/30/2013 10:36:00 AM

- A really beautiful poem Leonora! - Win or no win, it won my heart! - Good luck in the contest. - Thanks for a great year together here in P-soup - always nice to read your poems and always nice comment on my poem! - You're a friend I have become fond of! - Wish you : A HAPPY NEW YEAR!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun
Date: 1/4/2014 2:34:00 AM

Thank u sooo much my very dear friend Anne Lise. Big hugs!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/30/2013 9:46:00 AM

Thanks for the entry if it is for my contest, Leo

Len Gasun
Date: 1/4/2014 2:41:00 AM

You're much welcome my dear friend Dr. Ram. Big hugs! I hope you'll like my entry which is an experimental poem of another form. Big hugs!

Roger Horsch

Date: 12/30/2013 9:44:00 AM

You write with such beauty Leonora, I loved reading this beautiful poem....Hugs...Roger

Len Gasun
Date: 1/4/2014 2:42:00 AM

Thank u so much my dear friend Roqer. Big hugs!