Len Gasun Poet Ottava rima

Notes About The Poem

This poem is written with all the inspirations of Our Loving Almighty God

God Bursts Everywhere

My heart is filled with joy and thanksgiving,
When I wake up in the morning sunshine;
What a splendid and wonderful feeling, 
When I see you all my friends and love of mine.
Through the beauty of nature and surrounding,
And in you, I always feel His Love Divine.
God bursts everywhere in joys or in pain,
He's omnipresent in air we breathe in.



Dec. 30, 2013  10.20 pm


My first try of Ottava Rima poem. 

Second Place
Contest: God Bursts Everywhere
Judged: 1/8/14
Sponsor: Poet Dr. Ram Mehta


This poem is dedicated to all of you my dear poet friends. Happy New Year 2014!

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Farhana Akter May 19, 2014 at 12:31 PM Good like it

Joe Maverick January 12, 2014 at 6:19 PM Hello Leonora, hope this did well in the contest; Good thoughts here..' take care Joe..)

Stacey Brown January 8, 2014 at 7:52 AM very good write! congrats on this win!

Roger Horsch January 8, 2014 at 7:40 AM This is such a wonderful poem Leonora, congrats on your win.....Hugs......Roger

Dr.Ram Mehta January 8, 2014 at 1:34 AM Thanks for the entry and congratulations on fine win. All the best for the year 2014 ,Leo

Poet Destroyer A January 4, 2014 at 1:26 AM I've seen how happy you are, your energy burst with light, ... Leo, my sweet sis... I am glad I can swim in the air I breath, thick and thin... God, is Divine.... A blessing poem, my loving sis.... going to bed..Thank you for the phone call,,,, PD Len Gasun January 4, 2014 at 2:30 AM Thank u for stopping by my dearest sis! I wish you all the best. Sending my loving hugs, smiles, kisses w/ prayers to u & your family. Good night. Sleep well & sweet dreams.

Saanvi Dua December 31, 2013 at 4:35 AM Happy New Year , Leonara !! Do tell me your plans for New Year ! May this year bring lots of love , blessings , and fulfill many wishes and yes , lots of HAPPINESS !!! A wonderful write !! Love and smiles , Saanvi :)) Len Gasun January 4, 2014 at 2:31 AM Thank u so much my dear friend Saanvi. Wishing you & your family all the best as well. Big hugs!

Bukang Liwayway December 31, 2013 at 3:46 AM Superb poem before the end of 2013. clap clap clap!!! like it..Happy New Year my dear friend Leonora...hugs from me to you...mwuah!! :) Len Gasun January 4, 2014 at 2:32 AM Thanks for the nice comments and the round of applause my dear friend Maria.;))))))But I still need a confirmation if I did right with this experimented poem of mine;)) Hugs & kisses!

Russell Sivey December 30, 2013 at 4:37 PM This is such a beautiful and enlightening write my friend! You always have a pleasantness about you within your awesome poems! You are such a wonderful friend here on the Soup! What a brilliant piece this truly is, Great Work!! Len Gasun January 4, 2014 at 2:33 AM Thank u so much again for the very inspiring comments my dear friend Russell.

Anne-Lise Andresen December 30, 2013 at 10:36 AM - A really beautiful poem Leonora! - Win or no win, it won my heart! - Good luck in the contest. - Thanks for a great year together here in P-soup - always nice to read your poems and always nice comment on my poem! - You're a friend I have become fond of! - Wish you : A HAPPY NEW YEAR!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Len Gasun January 4, 2014 at 2:34 AM Thank u sooo much my very dear friend Anne Lise. Big hugs!

Dr.Ram Mehta December 30, 2013 at 9:46 AM Thanks for the entry if it is for my contest, Leo Len Gasun January 4, 2014 at 2:41 AM You're much welcome my dear friend Dr. Ram. Big hugs! I hope you'll like my entry which is an experimental poem of another form. Big hugs!

Roger Horsch December 30, 2013 at 9:44 AM You write with such beauty Leonora, I loved reading this beautiful poem....Hugs...Roger Len Gasun January 4, 2014 at 2:42 AM Thank u so much my dear friend Roqer. Big hugs!

Sara Kendrick December 30, 2013 at 9:19 AM Great work speaking of your faith..It is such an encouraging work..Enjoyed reading today..Sara Len Gasun January 4, 2014 at 2:43 AM Thanks for stopping by my dear friend Sara.