Kim Rodrigues Poet Free verse

GOD BLESS THE BESTIES

Edenic laughter of childhood
Caressed by carefree joy
Take us with you
To the land of unmeasurable 
Mirth with endless possibilities
God bless the besties
Young and untroubled
Stirring up the puddle waves
Making mud pies
Walking circles atop sandbox tire
Arm in arm
No enemies
Friends Forever

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Jude Herrick December 9, 2023 at 1:02 PM That is how it should be. Innocent is also wise. Kim Rodrigues December 9, 2023 at 8:13 PM True! :)

Mystic Rose Rose December 8, 2023 at 4:40 PM wish life was that simple after we grow older, lol, nice one Kim Kim Rodrigues December 9, 2023 at 8:13 PM I know! Let’s jump in a puddle and find out ;)

Paige Hind December 8, 2023 at 3:56 PM I agree; friends can be everything. Kim Rodrigues December 9, 2023 at 8:12 PM Thank you, Paige!

Victor Buhagiar December 8, 2023 at 10:39 AM Friendship is so important. Keep in touch. Kim Rodrigues December 8, 2023 at 1:32 PM I will! Been so busy. Will check out your poems later today. Have to go cook! Hugs

Shadow Hamilton December 7, 2023 at 10:01 AM I had a good chuckle at this tongue in cheek poem Kim its brilliant love it Hugs Shadow Kim Rodrigues December 8, 2023 at 5:47 AM Thank you, Shadow!

Hiya Sharma December 7, 2023 at 7:39 AM Oh my, this is such a heartwarming poem about two best friends, who filled every moment of their lives with magick and joy.. Childhood is truly a virtue which if hued carefully, becomes a blessed memory! Such a beautiful piece this is, dear Kim, so gorgeously crafted :) Kim Rodrigues December 8, 2023 at 5:48 AM Thank you so much for your uplifting comment, Sharma!

Tom Cunningham December 7, 2023 at 7:30 AM It lovely to watch the young innocent children at play, brought back memories of when my three daughters were young, now all married but I've now got four grandsons, makes you feel old. Tom Kim Rodrigues December 8, 2023 at 5:53 AM Thank you, Tom! Old or not we just enjoy those children :)