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GOD BLESS THE BESTIES

Edenic laughter of childhood Caressed by carefree joy Take us with you To the land of unmeasurable Mirth with endless possibilities God bless the besties Young and untroubled Stirring up the puddle waves Making mud pies Walking circles atop sandbox tire Arm in arm No enemies Friends Forever

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Jude Herrick

Date: 12/9/2023 1:02:00 PM

That is how it should be. Innocent is also wise.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/9/2023 8:13:00 PM

True! :)

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 12/8/2023 4:40:00 PM

wish life was that simple after we grow older, lol, nice one Kim

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/9/2023 8:13:00 PM

I know! Let’s jump in a puddle and find out ;)

Paige Hind

Date: 12/8/2023 3:56:00 PM

I agree; friends can be everything.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/9/2023 8:12:00 PM

Thank you, Paige!

Buhagiar Victor

Date: 12/8/2023 10:39:00 AM

Friendship is so important. Keep in touch.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/8/2023 1:32:00 PM

I will! Been so busy. Will check out your poems later today. Have to go cook! Hugs

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 12/7/2023 3:14:00 PM

I truly enjoyed your poem, Kim...you stirred up some memories of my carefree childhood with one of my besties...who's still my bestie even after 62 years...that's a long time. She's free spirited while I'm a serious soul...we've been that way since childhood. Have a pleasant evening, Sara

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/8/2023 5:47:00 AM

Thank you, Sara, and for sharing about yourself :)

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 12/7/2023 10:01:00 AM

I had a good chuckle at this tongue in cheek poem Kim its brilliant love it Hugs Shadow

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/8/2023 5:47:00 AM

Thank you, Shadow!

Hiya Sharma

Date: 12/7/2023 7:39:00 AM

Oh my, this is such a heartwarming poem about two best friends, who filled every moment of their lives with magick and joy.. Childhood is truly a virtue which if hued carefully, becomes a blessed memory! Such a beautiful piece this is, dear Kim, so gorgeously crafted :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/8/2023 5:48:00 AM

Thank you so much for your uplifting comment, Sharma!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/7/2023 7:30:00 AM

It lovely to watch the young innocent children at play, brought back memories of when my three daughters were young, now all married but I've now got four grandsons, makes you feel old. Tom

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/8/2023 5:53:00 AM

Thank you, Tom! Old or not we just enjoy those children :)