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those who have been to us callous what toward them is our response do ripples scar our void-like stance is compassion held in love’s sconce

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Date: 1/30/2024 8:39:00 AM
Good Morning. Your poem asks a very responsible question. We need to be more Christ-like. I enjoyed your words and what they mean to me and my responses. A very blessed poem! - Daniel
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Date: 1/30/2024 6:17:00 PM
Yes, earth life is a hard school and will keep posing such questions, refining consciousness
Date: 1/29/2024 8:28:00 PM
I like your question poem and it's focus on choosing a response, and observing compassion in the remit of love. I also like the /ns/ sounds of the end-of-line words - seeming to remind of the word 'response' and pull away from 'callous'.
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Date: 1/29/2024 9:15:00 PM
You have a keen poetic eye, Jeanette!

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