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Splatter painted, Pollock blessed, leggy I stand, among the green grass and healing Plantain in a kaleidoscope of color panned. A walking canvas in the meadowland stems, humorously stippled to entertain splatter painted, Pollock blessed; leggy I stand. Blush brushed by daylight, a cheeky garland; a stand bloomed within thin skinned constraints in a kaleidoscope of color panned. Pistils between petals unknown unplanned, joyous the sound of honey bees restrained, splatter painted, Pollock blessed; leggy I stand. A plantigrade intrusion, a new brand surface mounted digits adorned prearranged in a kaleidoscope of color panned. So bright the upright parts, so very grand one can but dream the crown gloriously manned splatter painted, Pollock blessed; leggy I stand in a kaleidoscope of color panned. Mused: Bella online Literary Review Winter 2015

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Date: 12/17/2016 8:14:00 PM
Lovely imagery!
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 12/18/2016 5:13:00 PM
Thanks Kim!
Date: 10/13/2015 2:21:00 PM
like pollock, this is a great splash of poetic canvas... huggs
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 10/13/2015 5:34:00 PM
I'm going to take that as a compliment!

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