Gobblin' Goblins

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That blackie cat sat fattened 'neath the ol' pumpkin moon, While the yummies in his tummy sang a hummy little tune, No more twitchy, glitchy, witchy tails or mousey little feets, For he'd gobbled all those goblins up as trick-or-treat eats! ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Good Luck Halloween" Poetry Contest, Eve Roper, Judge & Sponsor. ( I used photograph number two )

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/23/2019 6:32:00 PM

this was so clever. Excellent and Congrats to you.

Charles Messina

Date: 11/20/2019 5:52:00 AM

Great fun write Greg..Congrats on your top win my friend. Charlie

Eve Roper

Date: 11/19/2019 11:20:00 PM

Congratulations on your winning placement. Hugs Eve

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/19/2019 11:41:00 PM

Thank you so very much, Eve, I am so pleased you enjoyed it ... I don't do a lot of "fun" poems, but I do love them so! I am honored you found it worthy! Blessings! :o) <3

Na Na

Date: 11/19/2019 11:14:00 PM

Congrats on your win Gregory

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/19/2019 11:40:00 PM

Thanks so much to you, Sir Gregory! :o)

Robert Lindley

Date: 11/17/2019 7:48:00 AM

Excellent Halloween poem my friend. As a young kid we had a huge back cat that was my favorite after my favorite dog. The cat was huge and our dogs were scared of it. A huge strange dog came in our yard and our black cat attacked it-- ran it away! Great poetry my friend...

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/19/2019 11:39:00 PM

I had a black cat a few years ago, Robert, it was a stray Tom that adopted me, and I adored him - tore me apart when he passed. Many thanks for your kindness, friend! :o)