Gregory Richard Barden Poet Rhyme

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Gobblin' Goblins

That blackie cat sat fattened 'neath the ol' pumpkin moon,

While the yummies in his tummy sang a hummy little tune,

No more twitchy, glitchy, witchy tails or mousey little feets,

For he'd gobbled all those goblins up as trick-or-treat eats!






~ 1st Place ~  in the "Good Luck Halloween" Poetry Contest, Eve Roper, Judge & Sponsor.

( I used photograph number two )

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Andrea Dietrich November 23, 2019 at 6:32 PM this was so clever. Excellent and Congrats to you.

Charles Messina November 20, 2019 at 5:52 AM Great fun write Greg..Congrats on your top win my friend. Charlie

Eve Roper November 19, 2019 at 11:20 PM Congratulations on your winning placement. Hugs Eve Gregory Richard Barden November 19, 2019 at 11:41 PM Thank you so very much, Eve, I am so pleased you enjoyed it ... I don't do a lot of "fun" poems, but I do love them so! I am honored you found it worthy! Blessings! :o) <3

Na Na November 19, 2019 at 11:14 PM Congrats on your win Gregory Gregory Richard Barden November 19, 2019 at 11:40 PM Thanks so much to you, Sir Gregory! :o)

Robert Lindley November 17, 2019 at 7:48 AM Excellent Halloween poem my friend. As a young kid we had a huge back cat that was my favorite after my favorite dog. The cat was huge and our dogs were scared of it. A huge strange dog came in our yard and our black cat attacked it-- ran it away! Great poetry my friend... Gregory Richard Barden November 19, 2019 at 11:39 PM I had a black cat a few years ago, Robert, it was a stray Tom that adopted me, and I adored him - tore me apart when he passed. Many thanks for your kindness, friend! :o)

Juliet Ligon November 15, 2019 at 6:06 PM Great choice of words. This is sing-songy and fun. Gregory Richard Barden November 19, 2019 at 11:38 PM Thank you so very much, Juliet, blessings to you for your kindness! :o) <3

Regina Mcintosh November 14, 2019 at 5:45 AM A great write... fun... Blessings, Gina Gregory Richard Barden November 19, 2019 at 11:38 PM Many thanks to you, Regina - blessings! :o) <3

Jan Allison November 14, 2019 at 5:15 AM what a fun poem Greg, good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx Gregory Richard Barden November 19, 2019 at 11:37 PM Thank you very kindly, Jan, that is always an honor coming from you - I'm so pleased you enjoyed this one, Friend! :o) <3

Na Na November 14, 2019 at 4:49 AM Well done Gregory. I enjoyed this. It has a good change of getting high numbers in the contest. Good luck and thanks for sharing Gregory Richard Barden November 19, 2019 at 11:37 PM Thank you so very much, my friend, you were my lucky charm, it seems. Blessings, Sir Gregory! :o)