Go With the Flow

So much confusion clouding my mind
Spinning so fast no peace to find
Shall I, will I, can I, should I
Doubt upon doubt, 
Thoughts like a fast train
Changing at every station
What’s done can’t be changed 
What’s changed is my salvation
Why dwell on answers to questions that haven’t evolved
Take your time girl said the voice of reason
Be confident, be bold 
There’s no need to rush, chill and take it slow
The music is playing relax and go with the flow.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 1/19/2013 7:18:00 AM
I would read your "first" poem ..... it was a very well written poem, Allie. - - Have a nice weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/31/2011 6:39:00 PM
Good stuff, I enjoyed the ride
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Date: 3/18/2010 6:22:00 PM
ty kindly for the comment... ya it was just one of my bad days...it happens about once every couple yrs... what can you do...quite honestly i dont care what other people think... i mean ya i like feedback but even the negative feedback is just what they feel... who am i to judge that... btw i love this one of yours... lol its almost like you stopped in the middle of it and hit the bong a couple times and put a pink floyd record on...good tymes <3
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Date: 3/8/2010 12:32:00 PM
It is a great outlook on life, this is a fine piece ofpoetry with a great message Daniel
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Date: 3/5/2010 3:57:00 PM
I agee...this poem deserves to be featured. michael
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Date: 2/12/2010 10:13:00 AM
Allie, Congratulations on your poem being featured this week. Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 2/9/2010 12:00:00 PM
Congrats on this selection. "Going with the flow," dear Allie, in these times, is easier said than done. I like your poem mucho. Love, daver
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Date: 2/8/2010 11:09:00 AM
Congratulations on being featured on the home page this week with your poetry >> James
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Date: 2/8/2010 10:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. May you have many more Allie. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/8/2010 6:08:00 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece. Rgds Janette
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Date: 8/19/2009 11:20:00 AM
Kool poem Allie>>James
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Date: 8/19/2009 4:32:00 AM
Love your writing. Jodie
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Date: 8/19/2009 4:12:00 AM
I like lines 7 and 9. Interesting. Keep writing. Sara
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