Go With the Flow

So much confusion clouding my mind
Spinning so fast no peace to find
Shall I, will I, can I, should I
Doubt upon doubt, 
Thoughts like a fast train
Changing at every station
What’s done can’t be changed 
What’s changed is my salvation
Why dwell on answers to questions that haven’t evolved
Take your time girl said the voice of reason
Be confident, be bold 
There’s no need to rush, chill and take it slow
The music is playing relax and go with the flow.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Andresen Avatar
January 19, 2013 at 7:18 AM
I would read your "first" poem ..... it was a very well written poem, Allie. - - Have a nice weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Inka Avatar
January 31, 2011 at 6:39 PM
Good stuff, I enjoyed the ride
Patrick Avatar
March 18, 2010 at 6:22 PM
ty kindly for the comment... ya it was just one of my bad days...it happens about once every couple yrs... what can you do...quite honestly i dont care what other people think... i mean ya i like feedback but even the negative feedback is just what they feel... who am i to judge that... btw i love this one of yours... lol its almost like you stopped in the middle of it and hit the bong a couple times and put a pink floyd record on...good tymes <3
Cheeseman Avatar
March 8, 2010 at 12:32 PM
It is a great outlook on life, this is a fine piece ofpoetry with a great message Daniel
Poyntz Avatar
March 5, 2010 at 3:57 PM
I agee...this poem deserves to be featured. michael
Freeman Avatar
February 12, 2010 at 10:13 AM
Allie, Congratulations on your poem being featured this week. Sincerely, Moses
Austin Avatar
February 9, 2010 at 12:00 PM
Congrats on this selection. "Going with the flow," dear Allie, in these times, is easier said than done. I like your poem mucho. Love, daver
Fraser Avatar
February 8, 2010 at 11:09 AM
Congratulations on being featured on the home page this week with your poetry >> James
Brown Avatar
February 8, 2010 at 10:14 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. May you have many more Allie. Love, Carol
Fisher Avatar
February 8, 2010 at 6:08 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece. Rgds Janette
Fraser Avatar
August 19, 2009 at 11:20 AM
Kool poem Allie>>James
Quintero Avatar
August 19, 2009 at 4:32 AM
Love your writing. Jodie
Kendrick Avatar
August 19, 2009 at 4:12 AM
I like lines 7 and 9. Interesting. Keep writing. Sara
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