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Go With the Flow

When you go with the flow it can lead to a nice pond, relax, float upon your tube amidst the leafy fronds. But sometimes a nice flow doesn’t end good at all, sometimes that river flings you off a waterfall. Should you go with the flow? Well I can’t help you there, but if you go with the flow it is best to take care. You may end up nowhere.

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Date: 7/2/2019 8:09:00 PM
Interesting, and a bit of a comeuppance to all those who preach that you 'simply must' go with the flow, let the game come to you, etc., etc., bleah, bleah, bleah. :) gw
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Date: 6/30/2019 1:35:00 AM
G'day David … very wise advice indeed. A nice easy to read rhyming verse - thanks David - Lindsay
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Date: 6/29/2019 5:18:00 PM
Hello David Welch, i do agree . Unless you flow with the pen and let the words out. have a nice day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/30/2019 5:24:00 PM
You got a good point. have a nice eveningmy friend.
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David Welch
Date: 6/29/2019 7:51:00 PM
Well even there, if we all flowed and wrote exactly what we were thinking, they'd probably chuck us all off this site! Who knows. Thanks for reading. Glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 6/29/2019 2:32:00 PM
Beware to flow might leave you in despair....Nice one
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