David Welch Poet Rhyme

Go With the Flow

When you go with the flow
it can lead to a nice pond,
relax, float upon your tube
amidst the leafy fronds.

But sometimes a nice flow
doesn’t end good at all,
sometimes that river flings
you off a waterfall.

Should you go with the flow?
Well I can’t help you there,
but if you go with the flow
it is best to take care.

You may end up nowhere.

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Gershon Wolf July 2, 2019 at 8:09 PM Interesting, and a bit of a comeuppance to all those who preach that you 'simply must' go with the flow, let the game come to you, etc., etc., bleah, bleah, bleah. :) gw

Lindsay Laurie June 30, 2019 at 1:35 AM G'day David … very wise advice indeed. A nice easy to read rhyming verse - thanks David - Lindsay

Darlene De Beaulieu June 29, 2019 at 5:18 PM Hello David Welch, i do agree . Unless you flow with the pen and let the words out. have a nice day my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu June 30, 2019 at 5:24 PM You got a good point. have a nice eveningmy friend. David Welch June 29, 2019 at 7:51 PM Well even there, if we all flowed and wrote exactly what we were thinking, they'd probably chuck us all off this site! Who knows. Thanks for reading. Glad you enjoyed it.

Arturo Michael June 29, 2019 at 2:32 PM Beware to flow might leave you in despair....Nice one