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Go to Hell

I’m a fragile, dead corpse six feet under. A malignant and deadly being, So hand to me my belongings; That being my blackened wings. My power shall end you. Your being will fall. Apocalypse, I shall reign. Go to, Hell.
honorable mention in andrea's contest etheree me

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Date: 6/21/2010 7:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Andrea Dietrich's contest "Etheree Me" Nicole. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/20/2010 7:36:00 PM
I love the natural flow of this poem and the ending lines. There are times when one has to get serious. Congratulations on your success in the contest. Blessings, Joseph
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Date: 6/20/2010 3:18:00 PM
Kind of scary to think about. Much for the reader to ponder on. Congratulations on being a winner in Andrea's contest. Enjoy your success. Keep on writing. Karen
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Date: 6/20/2010 4:18:00 AM
HI, Nicole and thanks for participating in my little contest. You were not last of the HMs. The HMs just fall where they fall, I can't control it. I rather liked this one and it was very well written. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 6/13/2010 4:40:00 PM
Love this write Niki... very good....Michael
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Date: 6/11/2010 10:19:00 AM
Powerful, really like this one. I hope you are putting it in the contest.
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Date: 6/11/2010 2:14:00 AM
Disturbing, Frightening and well written. Excellent Etheree. Love, Will
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