Go On

Go on

Silence, emotional enemy
Cold shoulder envy
You’re gone again
You’re gone again
Broke in two
Shadow on a pale face 
Knows the truth
Heart keeps beating
You have stopped breathing
Go on 
Go on

Cold hand wrapped in mine
Warming up
warm breath fog hides your eyes
A mask in winter
You become disquised 
Go on
Go on

Turn around
Walk away
I see your breath follow you
Stuck on the ground
Have to stay
Your silhouette’s showing
Hunched down
Your energy glows
No sound
You’re gone again 
You’re gone again

I fell down
No more to give
I fell down
No life to live
Won’t go on
Go on
Go on
Walk into the shadow
Faint sound of song
Into the darkness
You're gone
Gone again
Gone again

Faint smell of your sweat
Stains left on the floor
You're memory anchored 
Onto my shore
My wave’s crash
You drift away
Water filling my mouth
Stopping words to say
And the sentences are
Gone again
Gone again
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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July 7, 2014 at 8:00 PM
Tamilyn,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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June 27, 2014 at 5:58 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Tamilyn. I am glad you discovered this nice community of writers and hope you enjoy the site. Read the work of other poet's and comment if you find something you like; many poets will return the favor. Over time you will get to "know" some of us. You are welcome to visit my page anytime. Enjoy!
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June 25, 2014 at 2:13 PM
NICE POEM................W~elcome to poetrysoup. E~mblem of the best poetry website which gives you; l~ove that comes from richness of her words, c~ourage to harden your faith against writer's block, o~rientation toward being the best bard, m~emories about famous poems and poets. E~mbrace this lovely website TAMILYN . T~his is a caring community o~f all pleasant poems and prettiest poets. P~oet is a bard known for his o~rderly composition of words to e~ncourage love and peace, t~ransparent truth and reality, r~hymes of time and beauty of nature, y~ellowjournalism and comedy. S~oup is what we dissolve our food with. O~ne who dissolve his life in poetry soup will be u~pgraded.Please TAMILYN cook for the world; "p~oetrysoup"
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June 25, 2014 at 11:44 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Tamilyn :) - I choose your first great written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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June 25, 2014 at 5:38 AM
Deep flow, sad thoughts TamilynA nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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