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He asked what I was going to do with my life
My thoughts ran like a wild hog from Pakastaine
I wanted to take my time pacing my answer in strife
I had already seen the world understand
Already been through college
I was no longer interested in playing with the band
Life, long and lean wisdoms hardly seen
So many stories as I am slowly growing old
Already been through Nasa and left them green
What in this world would make me happier 
My conscious already have been deemed
I took his hand and explained like a fien
I didn't know yet simple as it could be
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Tacito Avatar
July 26, 2013 at 8:06 AM
There are a couple of spelling errors on here: "College", "Conscious", etc. That said, it's kind that one would ask you what you want to become of yourself. Most can care less...this was a good, reflective piece. :)
Courtney Avatar
August 14, 2013 at 6:28 PM
corrected thank you Drake
Courtney Avatar
August 11, 2013 at 1:38 PM
Thanks Drake nice to hear from you again
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