Go, If You Must

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Date written: 01/13/2022

go if you must, bon voyage, but I implore, please... gift-wrap me memories so rich they can't be bought with all of the money in the world; make my soul fly with your parting embrace, and bless me with... moments that linger and burn. (Modified Fibonacci)

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Terry Miller

Date: 5/1/2025 8:12:00 AM

I love this one Edward, congratulations

Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/2/2025 4:36:00 AM

Thank you very much, Terry;-)

Christuraj Alex

Date: 3/16/2022 2:05:00 AM

I am very new to Fibonacci form. The poem is, indeed, beautiful. Congratulations!

Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/16/2022 5:24:00 AM

Thank you so much, Christuraj:-)

L Milton Hankins

Date: 1/13/2022 9:54:00 AM

Nice one, Edward. It is so wonderful to have "memories so rich [they] can't be bought with all of the money in the world." I loved this thought, particularly. Good to see many being introduced to this mathematically-inspired form.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/13/2022 11:34:00 AM

Thank you so much, Milt:-) Welcome back, my friend.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/13/2022 8:34:00 AM

Love it!

Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/13/2022 11:35:00 AM

Thank you, Kim:-)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/13/2022 4:02:00 AM

Awesome my friend. These moments linger. Into my FAVES.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/13/2022 4:12:00 AM

Thank you so much, Vijay:-) I appreciate the fave, my friend.