Edward Ibeh Poet Fibonacci

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Date written: 01/13/2022

Go, If You Must

go 
if 
you must,
bon voyage,
but I implore, please...
gift-wrap me memories so rich 
they can't be bought with all of the money in the world;
make my soul fly with your parting embrace, and bless me with...
                                                                moments that linger and burn.


 (Modified Fibonacci)

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Terry Miller May 1, 2025 at 8:12 AM I love this one Edward, congratulations Edward Ibeh May 2, 2025 at 4:36 AM Thank you very much, Terry;-)

Christuraj Alex March 16, 2022 at 2:05 AM I am very new to Fibonacci form. The poem is, indeed, beautiful. Congratulations! Edward Ibeh March 16, 2022 at 5:24 AM Thank you so much, Christuraj:-)

L Milton Hankins January 13, 2022 at 9:54 AM Nice one, Edward. It is so wonderful to have "memories so rich [they] can't be bought with all of the money in the world." I loved this thought, particularly. Good to see many being introduced to this mathematically-inspired form. Edward Ibeh January 13, 2022 at 11:34 AM Thank you so much, Milt:-) Welcome back, my friend.

Kim Rodrigues January 13, 2022 at 8:34 AM Love it! Edward Ibeh January 13, 2022 at 11:35 AM Thank you, Kim:-)

Vijay Pandit January 13, 2022 at 4:02 AM Awesome my friend. These moments linger. Into my FAVES. Edward Ibeh January 13, 2022 at 4:12 AM Thank you so much, Vijay:-) I appreciate the fave, my friend.