Go, Girl

Run,girl Flee from your dreams Too optimistic Find a new reality Jump,girl on the brink of your scheme no more ingenuity nothing as it seemed Sprint,girl no longer one changed forever Your past has just begun Cry,girl you are broken heart in pieces Nothing left is spoken -Victoria Ward

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Lenny Gazbowski

Date: 5/23/2016 12:27:00 PM

Victoria, you pose several questions with this fine write. If I was writing this I would not use the commer on the first line of each verse, but that is me ! I do use punctuality on rare occasions. The girl in this poem is escaping from her dreams and her journey concludes with a girl who has lost all hope. The poem has an effortless charm to it Victoria,and I enjoyed the read.

Victoria Ward

Date: 5/23/2016 7:17:00 AM

i dont mind constructive criticisim