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Suzette Prime

Syllable count: 2, 3, 5, 7, 11, etc. PLUS a philosophical statement. Any combination of a prime number syllable count may be used per line, to avoid mirror images as this will detract from the free style feel. The line breaks serve as punctuation and no caps used, unless it is called for.

If you should notice any spelling or grammatical errors...PLEASE...point them out to me, as I am compiling these poems for my new book. Thank you, Emile.

wars, drugs, poverty famine, fear, rape, death and degradation that's the kind of world desperate immigrants flee and yet, we won't let them in go die on the other side of our new wall and stay away, this is ours we should be ashamed...they are fellow humans there's no kindness in our hearts no tolerance, even for God's commandment that we love our neighbors, as we love ourselves (Suzette Prime) Aug. 11, 2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Date: 8/16/2018 6:02:00 PM
A far cry from Love Thy Neighbour, for sure, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/16/2018 7:40:00 PM
Thanks Line, I welcome your input my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/12/2018 12:24:00 AM
Weighty concerns very well expressed. The divisions may outlive their most boorish facillitator, but maybe there are enough good people to overcome the hate in the end.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/12/2018 8:47:00 AM
Thanks Lawrence, we can only hope that in the end love will win the battle for our hearts my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/11/2018 11:18:00 PM
Absolutely horrible situation here and your poem describes it perfectly (as usual of course!). FAVED *soupmail
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Date: 8/11/2018 10:21:00 AM
the "...killers in high places who say their prayers out loud..." (leonard cohen)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/11/2018 11:02:00 AM
Thanks Sand, we are in agreement my friend, Emile.