DM Babbit Poet Rhyme

Go Ask Alice

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=f1RQltwPfvw&list=PLO-UbICkLW9NAg0kqNYwKH6ytcqm9L8OO&index=2


Dreams fade, easily slip away unseen
 we wonder if they were anything at all,
 still we pursue visions our minds deem
 darkened in the shadows that fall.
The darkness wraps around our heads
 cutting off the air, warmth in our beds
 and with closed eyes and cowering in dread
 the promises are simple but well spread.
Just go ask Alice
 and the truth can be revealed
 hidden behind the lies of malice
 as our futures now are sealed.

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Lim'Rik Flats November 9, 2017 at 7:09 PM I've been asking Alice for years, but she doesn't pay any attention to me;-) Just kidding — always like these speculations, this is a dandy. ~ john

Vickie Hurtt - Thayer November 8, 2017 at 9:46 AM WHY DOWN A RABBIT HOLE, WOULD SHE GO, ANYWAY? LOVE IT..,VICKIE

Mick Talbot November 8, 2017 at 3:29 AM Alice, where did she live, ah yes, Cloud Cuckoo Land. No, Wonderland, where nothing ever worked as planned. So why should I ask Alice? Love your poem, hope you like my reply. Thanks for dropping in to read mine. :-)