Go Ahead

Go ahead. 

Cast my heart out to the sea,
and watch it crumble quietly,
break my spirit, make it rain,
you'll see what happens, 
see no pain.

Take your shot and do your best,
then watch me laugh
at all your mess,
try to hurt me,
it won't work,
so go ahead,
and do your worst.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Alexander Avatar
February 19, 2014 at 6:48 PM
A very good write, brief, and to the point. I love it! A taunt to those who try to hurt. Well done! - Mike
Dahlusion Avatar
February 12, 2014 at 8:03 AM
This is a poet shooting both barrels from the hip and hitting the target dead on. Bravo, Poet!
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