Daniel Cwiak Poet Limerick

Go

There we basked in Eden all aglow,

         With no cares or worries and Eve in tow,

     But the serpent spoke to her in his slithery way,

         We ate the apple, so we could not stay,

     The Lord spoke only one last word to us..."GO"!

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Poet Destroyer A June 23, 2010 at 7:42 AM get going lol skatter,, love your write... you know yeah it's a bad thing they ate the apple but who's perfect right lol,, reguardless they just made life interesting ....P.D.