g’night

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~ for Mom ~


you …

kiss my hand three times
as tender as a thistle, borne
‘my angel’ you whisper, as I kiss yours -
skin as thin as paper
careworn by the million things you
have done for me, but warm …
I turn at the door to
shut the light -
just in time to snatch your
sweetened kiss from the air
I return the same …
hugging it to your chest like
a child’s doll,
you smile, eyes closed -
‘I love you’ we exchange softly …
such a silly little ritual
among a thousand others we have
yielded over the years …
but none as precious
none as dear to my being
none that I now miss as terribly
for the sadly sobering fact
that we will never, ever … ever
share it …

again.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 4/24/2025 7:25:00 PM
I do appreciate this piece of writing
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Date: 3/23/2025 6:18:00 PM
Greg, Evening's last best words between two souls in 'g'night'. Finest moments in memory put down on page. Though perhaps, hardest pledge made. -Richard
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Date: 12/2/2024 3:30:00 AM
Dear Greg, This is so heart breaking, yet life affirming at the same time... It's Heartwarming to know you had such a loving relationship with your Mum. It must have taken courage to write and post, and bring those memories into the present moment. Beautifully, and tenderly written...(( Warm Hugs)) (I look so forward to your poems, they are written from the heart with honesty. Please forgive me for not having commented-I've been trying to unravel myself the last few years.: D.) Will do my best
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