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contest...Gnarled, Graceful, Green words

sponsor... Constance La France

Gnarled

The gnarled hands of woodworkers know the pain
a grip that's crippled from years of constant work
to grasp or carry a momentous strain
this problem is a continuous irk

Nothing can be done but take it in stride
it's a pain from a lifetime that's chosen
there's no complaint, no regrets, only pride
though at times, all the fingers are frozen

They lock firmly in place, become stiff and rigid
as the hands of old craftsmen are calloused
they're earned from hardwoods tightly fitted
made perfect so the work can be purchased

hands of a furniture maker are hard
they're worn and bent, sometimes gnarled and scarred
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La France Avatar
October 8, 2023 at 11:30 PM
Frederic, excellent poem and congratulations on your win in my contest, Constance
Andresen Avatar
October 3, 2023 at 12:36 PM
- Congratulations on your win, Frederic :) - hugs
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September 29, 2023 at 2:29 AM
This could also be a modern day sonnet my friend.. It is very good rhymes and i like how you used different ones that are not common, like caroused and purchased and you are right people who work hard in a physical way know better... always a pleasure to read you and see you active on here.. All the best in the contest..
Andresen Avatar
September 28, 2023 at 1:01 PM
- Never complains .. he is proud of his profession - Not many of the "old school" today, Frederic ... a lovely poem :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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