Gluttony

ghastly gluttony one of seven deadly sins with appalling good reasons total self disrespect abusing one's own body that wonderful mechanism no remorse no thought millions starving and dying balancing haves and have nots Submitted on October 22, 2018 for contest ONE OF THE SEVEN DEADLY SINS sponsored by EDWARD IBEH - RANKED 1ST

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Susan Palli

Date: 11/7/2018 12:34:00 PM

Congrats! Well done, Line.

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/7/2018 2:27:00 PM

Thanks, Susan. Most appreciated.

Eve Roper

Date: 11/6/2018 9:48:00 PM

Back with a big congratulations on your win :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/7/2018 7:38:00 AM

Thanks, Eve. Most appreciated.

Purbasha Roy

Date: 11/6/2018 8:31:00 PM

Many congratulations

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/6/2018 8:36:00 PM

Thank you for your much appreciated visit and comment, Purbasha.

Deb Radke

Date: 11/6/2018 8:24:00 PM

This is a thought provoking piece of writing. I especially appreciate your line 'no remorse no thought'. It truly describes this sin. Congratulations on your winning placement in the contest. My best. Deb

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/6/2018 8:37:00 PM

Thank you very much, Deb. Most appreciated.

Edward Ibeh

Date: 11/6/2018 3:58:00 PM

Thanks for participating in my contest, Line!:-) A splendid write, my friend! Congratulations on your top win!

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/6/2018 5:36:00 PM

Thank you so much, Edward. I look forward to reading all winning poems.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/24/2018 9:06:00 PM

Wow! That last verse!

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/24/2018 9:42:00 PM

Thank you so much, Kim, for your most appreciated visit and comment.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 10/23/2018 6:23:00 PM

Food is food whether it's $1000. a plate or $5. People can enjoy and digest an expensive meal in good conscience though there are many starving; best of luck in the contest.

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/23/2018 8:36:00 PM

Food somehow tastes so much better when people aren't starving around you. Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, ML.