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Grass clutch to the music of dew when spring is near. When you glide, the breeze brings an impactful smell. The spring can hold the most sway; it will indeed appear. Although sunbeams are splendid, the clouds are scant. Sea waves play tunes, and hued spring blossoms inhale. God gives us the spring climate as a merciful necklet. I look up, curious around how the cloud is adept to fly. Many tangled timberlands and a slew of vines. Sufficient vigor gasp you to take off with the hawky. Purple tulips clasp dance to the voice of gold bloom. Grasp the mysterious downpour vibration on the trees. The desire for hotter days after a long spell of gloom. This is a delight that no gem or cash can yield. When warmth is here, the world is enticing to nibble. The thawing spring can soar a genuine flavor to the head.
Written June 25, 2021 Writing Prompt - Grasp - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 7/16/2021 11:50:00 AM
Lasaad, congratulations on your placement in my Writing Prompt - Grasp - Challenge! Your use of the required words to weave this poem is awesome ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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Date: 7/16/2021 12:18:00 PM
Thank you so much, Constance; I appreciate you reading and placing my poem. Your comment is uplifting and encouraging. Blessings and kindest regards.
Date: 7/12/2021 11:07:00 AM
Love the thought of wearing spring like a precious pendant Lasaad. This poem displays all the loveliness of spring! Kudos and high flives to you for your win! Sending you the blessings of spring for every day my friend!
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Date: 7/12/2021 7:08:00 AM
Beautifully Written. Congratulations!
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Date: 6/26/2021 12:14:00 PM
As fresh and beautiful as the spring itself is this magnificent poem of yours, my friend, Lasaad. Blessings!
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Date: 6/26/2021 5:29:00 AM
You captured spring well in your verse Lasaad, great use of the allocated words.. Best of luck Tom
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Date: 6/26/2021 5:43:00 AM
Thank you so much. Dear Tom, you know my friend, it's difficult to know if we did well until we get some feedback in this type of preselected words. Have a wonderful weekend as well. Thank you once more.
Date: 6/26/2021 5:17:00 AM
Beautiful imagery, Lasaad. Spring indeed soars in these verses. All the best.
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Date: 6/26/2021 5:28:00 AM
Thank you so much dear friend Vijay, for the comment, and we'll definitely look forward to more of your beautiful poetry. Have a great weekend.
Date: 6/26/2021 1:12:00 AM
very well done. Perfect use of chosen words. Best for a win.
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Date: 6/26/2021 5:45:00 AM
Thank you, dear friend Victor; you always know that your point of view is to be trusted.

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