Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Free verse

- Glowing and Hot -

I've been searching for a heart of crystal
Night has a greedy desire daylight is my strength
I just hope your heart hear me now
Can not let the world pass every second counts
There will surely come a day when you want to dance

The whole wide world will smile with us
I can hear the love in your voice
It feels so right when love burns again
Glowing splash of lava just like a wild fire
Seasons change but nothing changes our first burning kiss





27.02.2015
A-L Andresen :)

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Bongani Zungu May 27, 2015 at 1:54 AM "It feels so right when love burns again Glowing splash of lava just like a wild fire Seasons change but nothing changes our first burning kiss" What an awesome combination of words! Should my EX GF say these words to me, i tell you it was going to be very hard to resist and say no her! Thank you for sharing. Anne-Lise Andresen May 27, 2015 at 3:23 AM - :))) ..... Yes, it's true ..... but, a poem can say more than normal conversations :)) - Bongani, thanks for the lovely visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman May 3, 2015 at 5:04 PM Hello Dear Anne-Lise!! Checking out one of your older writes here. A "glowing splash of lava just like a wild fire," huh?? WOW -- and the "first burning kiss." I always like the imagery you choose in your writes very much!! Bravo on this!! A "7" + FAV. Best Wishes Always, Gary Anne-Lise Andresen May 4, 2015 at 3:13 AM - A kiss who sets scars in the memory :))) - Gary, thanks for the lovely visit, a 7 + fav and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Julia Ward March 19, 2015 at 11:26 AM A passionate poem, and I enjoyed the read. Anne-Lise Andresen March 19, 2015 at 11:37 AM - Julia, thanks for the lovely visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Suburban Lovechild March 15, 2015 at 2:35 PM Nice write, expounds upon the kiss as the ultimate weapon of desire and sensuality, great job. Anne-Lise Andresen March 15, 2015 at 2:43 PM - Thank you,Suburban - I wish you a lovely Sunday - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock March 6, 2015 at 1:57 PM The romance that comes along with that first kiss. Nicely written. love phyl Anne-Lise Andresen March 6, 2015 at 2:11 PM - Phyllis, thanks for the lovely visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Janet Eaton March 3, 2015 at 8:08 PM Wow Anne Lise love this. That first burning kiss never changes and is never forgotten. Hugs Janet Anne-Lise Andresen March 4, 2015 at 3:01 AM - Janet thanks for the lovely visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath March 3, 2015 at 12:23 PM Excellent truth. No one can forget such burning.... Wonderful remembrance of the past. A nice dedication too. i feel 7+ here. Loved always,bl Anne-Lise Andresen March 3, 2015 at 12:30 PM - Thanks my friend Bl for the nice visit, a 7 and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Shane Cooper March 1, 2015 at 9:16 PM Hi Anne-Lise, What a lovely poem, the final sentence is fantastic, it justs makes the work eternal. thank you for sharing with us. love Shane xxx Anne-Lise Andresen March 2, 2015 at 2:22 AM - Thank you my friend, Shane :) - I wish you a wonderful new week :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper March 1, 2015 at 12:20 PM Glowing splash of lava, that is hot, hot passion. A 7 dear friend I love the visual descriptions. Blessings ox Anne-Lise Andresen March 2, 2015 at 2:22 AM - Thank you my friend, Eve - I wish you a wonderful new week :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Cherl Dunn February 28, 2015 at 7:40 PM Dear Anne Lise, Wow girl this is a work of passion my lady, great job and thanks for your comment on my tribute to Mystic Rose, she is one wonderful friend and lady and she and I can't wait for springtime, cheri love always cheri Anne-Lise Andresen March 1, 2015 at 5:08 AM - Thank you,dear Cherl - I wish you a lovely Sunday - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick February 28, 2015 at 5:08 PM Passionate one..Enjoyed reading your work today..Thanks for the encouraging comments..Sara Anne-Lise Andresen March 1, 2015 at 5:07 AM - Thank you, dear Sara - I wish you a lovely Sunday - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus February 28, 2015 at 3:31 PM Most romantic, Anne Lise...and the final line is unforgettable!! Hope you're having a lovely weekend. hugs /x/ paul Anne-Lise Andresen March 1, 2015 at 5:07 AM - Thank you my friend, Paul - I wish you a lovely Sunday - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud February 28, 2015 at 12:13 PM deeply expressed, dear anne..surely a lava of a kiss!.. hope you are okay.. happy weekend!.. huggs Anne-Lise Andresen February 28, 2015 at 12:34 PM - Thank you my friend, Nette - I wish you a lovely weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak February 28, 2015 at 8:44 AM Oh so beautiful, Anne Lise! Love spins around and around, propelled by that first kiss. Anne-Lise Andresen February 28, 2015 at 12:34 PM - Thank you my friend, Monterey - I wish you a lovely weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Casarah Nance February 28, 2015 at 7:46 AM What a wonderful first kiss that feels so hot hot hot like wild fire. Never let a flame like that get smothered! :) Anne-Lise Andresen February 28, 2015 at 8:44 AM - Thank you my friend, Casarah - I wish you a lovely weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Janet Eaton February 28, 2015 at 7:12 AM Beautiful and inspiring Anne. Love this Janet Anne-Lise Andresen February 28, 2015 at 8:43 AM - Thank you, dear Janet :) - I wish you a lovely weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May February 27, 2015 at 7:03 PM beautiful write Anne ....hugs Anne-Lise Andresen February 28, 2015 at 8:42 AM - Thank you my friend, Joseph :) - I wish you a lovely weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

David Meade February 27, 2015 at 3:32 PM Love that last line -- powerful image! A kiss that ignited a love that last a life time! Anne-Lise Andresen February 28, 2015 at 8:41 AM - Thank you my friend David - I wish you a lovely weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis February 27, 2015 at 2:43 PM Very romantic and tender poem that caresses the heart to its core, dear Anne-Lise. Hugs Anne-Lise Andresen February 27, 2015 at 2:50 PM - Thank you my dear friend Demertios - I wish you a lovely weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kp Nunez February 27, 2015 at 1:03 PM I love this Anne-Lise. Love prevails, seasons come and go, but love will remain. Thanks for sharing. a 7. Have a happy weekend. :D Kim (PS. submission finally went through, thanks) Anne-Lise Andresen February 27, 2015 at 1:23 PM - Glad it went fine :) - thank you for the lovely visit, a 7 and always pleasant comments dear Kim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Neva Romaine February 27, 2015 at 12:51 PM Hey Anne Lise, stopped by for a visit and found this truly sweet poem from you. A true expression of hope and passion and great imagery. Well done. Be Blessed, Neva Anne-Lise Andresen February 27, 2015 at 1:15 PM - I'm glad you stopped at my poem, thanks for nice visit and comment Neva - hugs // Anne-Lise :)