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Glow Worm In Love

Glow worm in,

          love with

Neon lamp.


Written 5-31-11

fantasyhaiku

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Jack Horne

Date: 7/12/2011 2:23:00 PM

LOL, is that the hedgehog in love with a yard broom? Fun piece, James : )

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/12/2011 11:00:00 AM

This is adorable, James. Insects do seem to be attracted to almost any light source. And I'd like to thank you for giving Joseph some encouragement. I know how much he appreciates it. He has some remarkable work and was shocked when he placed first in one of my contests. I judged blindly and had no idea who'd written "Open Sores," but it really touched my heart. Have a great Sunday! Love, Carolyn

Kash Poet

Date: 6/4/2011 8:02:00 AM

Excellent Haiku here James...enjoyed.

James Peranteau

Date: 6/4/2011 7:50:00 AM

*smiles*...my little Noah used to have a glow worm that lit-up...this write reminded me of that dear poet...I'm thinking though, your glow worm is a little deeper ! Nice flowing write ! Have a wonderful weekend sir ! Much love, james

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 6/2/2011 11:32:00 AM

Awww, this made me chuckle aloud-- too sweet and adorable! I am actually reminded of the firefly I took home one time-- I honestly think he thought he was communicating with the glow-in-the-dark stars in my room :(.... very cute write! :)

Gwendolen Song

Date: 6/2/2011 10:36:00 AM

This is soooo reminiscent of my children's bedtime days---mommy, I'm scared!----Grab your glow worm then! haha. The neon lamp is the alien inside the glow worm...haha. (too much caffeine today, eh?) Cutesy cutesy write, James. You are so versatile. Gwendolen

Sarah Seraphin

Date: 6/1/2011 7:46:00 PM

* “Kind of Like Coffee & Cream * Or * Flowers & Honeybee's * 'Glow Worms & Neon Lights * My Dear Precious James. * Love Those Sweeet Thoughts * And * Thank You * With Your Kind & Appreciated Visit * Very Sweeet * Wonderful Poem. * Sincerely Yours * Sarah” *