Glow Worm In Love

Glow worm in,

          love with

Neon lamp.


Written 5-31-11
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Horne Avatar
July 12, 2011 at 2:23 PM
LOL, is that the hedgehog in love with a yard broom? Fun piece, James : )
Devonshire Avatar
June 12, 2011 at 11:00 AM
This is adorable, James. Insects do seem to be attracted to almost any light source. And I'd like to thank you for giving Joseph some encouragement. I know how much he appreciates it. He has some remarkable work and was shocked when he placed first in one of my contests. I judged blindly and had no idea who'd written "Open Sores," but it really touched my heart. Have a great Sunday! Love, Carolyn
Poet Avatar
June 4, 2011 at 8:02 AM
Excellent Haiku here James...enjoyed.
Peranteau Avatar
June 4, 2011 at 7:50 AM
*smiles*...my little Noah used to have a glow worm that lit-up...this write reminded me of that dear poet...I'm thinking though, your glow worm is a little deeper ! Nice flowing write ! Have a wonderful weekend sir ! Much love, james
K. Avatar
June 2, 2011 at 11:32 AM
Awww, this made me chuckle aloud-- too sweet and adorable! I am actually reminded of the firefly I took home one time-- I honestly think he thought he was communicating with the glow-in-the-dark stars in my room :(.... very cute write! :)
Song Avatar
June 2, 2011 at 10:36 AM
This is soooo reminiscent of my children's bedtime days---mommy, I'm scared!----Grab your glow worm then! haha. The neon lamp is the alien inside the glow worm...haha. (too much caffeine today, eh?) Cutesy cutesy write, James. You are so versatile. Gwendolen
Seraphin Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 7:46 PM
* “Kind of Like Coffee & Cream * Or * Flowers & Honeybee's * 'Glow Worms & Neon Lights * My Dear Precious James. * Love Those Sweeet Thoughts * And * Thank You * With Your Kind & Appreciated Visit * Very Sweeet * Wonderful Poem. * Sincerely Yours * Sarah” *
Sweetheart Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 4:14 PM
oh so sweet.. even the little glow worm needs luv. very nice James...
Fraser Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 10:18 AM
Quirky Haiku James, nice one....:)
A  Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 12:41 AM
cool haiku Luv*Skat
Dietrich Avatar
May 31, 2011 at 9:38 PM
ahh, this is cute. I bet it could happen. heehee
Loving Iii Avatar
May 31, 2011 at 7:33 PM
Like the moth to the flame.
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