Sotto Poet Poet Rhyme

Glow in the Haze

Written: September 30th, 2025, for contest sponsored by Line Gauthier

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Ashen skies crack across my brow,
I reach for the glow, yet I’m unsure how. 
Silvery haze over the ocean's thick breath,
Envelops me in a shroud of death. 
Drifting through the raging, turbulent roar, 
I perceive the stillness beneath the core.

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Valsa George October 2, 2025 at 12:41 AM Great penning as always, dear friend. "Drifting through the raging, turbulent roar, I perceive the stillness beneath the core." This is the gift of self introspection and enlightenment. Remarkable entry. All the Best dear friend.

Victor Buhagiar October 1, 2025 at 7:33 AM Ashen skies set the mood for this poem. So well done.

sara Etgen-Baker September 30, 2025 at 6:10 PM wow, what an engaging poem dear Sotto!! loved 'ashen skies' and 'envelops me in a shroud of death.' Best wishes with this contest entry, hugs from Texas, sara

Yann Rolland September 30, 2025 at 5:14 PM deep and beautiful, i loved the music too, thanks poet wishes

Paige Hind September 30, 2025 at 4:11 PM Absolutely breathtaking, Sotto. That beginning, wow-

Paula Goldsmith September 30, 2025 at 3:46 PM I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Glow in the Haze" write. "Good Luck" Have a fun day writing away.........