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Glow In My Eye

As I sit here, glancing at the world, The glow in my eye slowly fades. Waiting in anticipation, The glow in my eye slowly fades. Questioning where I stand in the minds of my peers, The glow in my eye slowly fades. I sit here wondering, where the time goes, The glow in my eye slowly fades. Though the glow in my eye may be gone, time and life keeps moving on. I can not stop moving forward,even though every step feels like eternal horror. The glow in my eye.. is gone -Downed Jester Lunch Time Expression

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/19/2015 10:47:00 AM
The repetition in your write strengthens your meaning, Nicely written.
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Downed Jester
Date: 3/21/2015 12:57:00 AM
Thank you! Your compliments are very much appreciated!
Date: 3/16/2015 12:38:00 AM
Jeff, Dropped by to say hi and congratulate you on having your poem selected by Soup's Administration. This is a wonderful poem to have featured on the homepage. ~Always & Forever~ LINDA
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Date: 3/15/2015 4:41:00 PM
JEFF:) Congratulations on having your awesome poem featured on the soups Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Date: 3/15/2015 6:49:00 PM
Thank you very much! I do not understand (I'm new) what do they base their choices on featuring poems?
Date: 3/6/2015 3:22:00 AM
JEFF, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 3/6/2015 4:56:00 PM
Wow thank! Your kind words are very appreciated! Ive been looking for a site lile this for years, it really feels nice to have other people see my writings :) im trying to wrote atleast once a week!

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