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Glow

...for D.H. Lawrence Sit by the fire my love and let its flare caress you softly, soft as the suggestion of my touch fluttering gently on your skin yet slowly fading, as frail embers quit their glow and sputter cold. My passion shall o'ercome flame's waning appetite and keep you warm, till stars rescind their luster to the dawn.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/12/2008 4:23:00 PM
Beautiful poem. I really like the last line. Nice dedication. Enjoyable read. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 12/7/2008 12:13:00 PM
Beautifully tender poetry, and I adore anything to do with love by a warm fire. The last stanza is especially lovely. ~Juliane
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Date: 11/27/2008 5:27:00 AM
This beautiful poem is a tender caress. Awesome write. Thank you for sharing your words. Love Robin
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Date: 11/24/2008 4:57:00 AM
Beautiful. That "sputter cold" is so perfect, so cold.
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Date: 11/24/2008 3:25:00 AM
Such a warm, passionate write, yearning and lovely in its fire. beautiful, love Kristin
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