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Earth - Water Drop  Earth Water Leaf Wallpaper

- Glossy Raindrop -

A raindrop on the green leaf

     Restless it rolls like a small marble

     Now whispered and revealed

     No power will dim a glossy drop

     The tide rises and the tide falls












- 13.08.2016
- Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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- Published in the Newspaper : 24.08.2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Georgieva Avatar
August 28, 2016 at 3:06 PM
Such a lovely sweet poem:)
Andresen Avatar
August 28, 2016 at 3:47 PM
- Thank you for the sweet comments and visits, Victoria :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Devnath  Avatar
August 25, 2016 at 3:30 PM
Beautiful poem on glossy rain drop with a beautiful picture. A pure sweet poem my lovely lovely friend. A 7. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl
Andresen Avatar
August 26, 2016 at 9:41 AM
- Thank you Bl, for the lovely comments a 7 and visits :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Vincent Avatar
August 18, 2016 at 9:59 AM
Beautiful!!! A straight 7 from me my dear. I have never been disappointed anytime I visit your page but this one today, right from that image, is just magnificent.
Andresen Avatar
August 18, 2016 at 10:12 AM
- Thank you Messoh, for the lovely comments a 7 and visits :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kannan Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 4:54 AM
Wow...This is so lovely to read..I enjoyed it...
Andresen Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 2:07 PM
- Thank you for the sweet comments and visits, Supraja :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Roper Avatar
August 14, 2016 at 4:55 PM
A natural lens :-) Nice, thank you for the beauty Hugs Eve
Andresen Avatar
August 15, 2016 at 4:04 AM
- Eve, thank you for the lovely comments and visits :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
May Avatar
August 14, 2016 at 4:10 PM
A wonderful write Sunshine...enjoyed
Andresen Avatar
August 15, 2016 at 4:04 AM
- Thank you for the lovely comments and visits, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Deb Avatar
August 14, 2016 at 12:13 PM
so sweet scratch ...loved the flow of wording .hugs!
Andresen Avatar
August 14, 2016 at 12:25 PM
- Nilima, thank you for the lovely comments and visits :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
August 14, 2016 at 10:05 AM
I enjoyed this immensely with the beautiful picture.
Andresen Avatar
August 14, 2016 at 11:07 AM
- Thank you for the lovely comments and visits, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
August 14, 2016 at 8:09 AM
A mesmerizing raindrop enclosed in a captivating verse. A seven dear, Anne-Lise!
Andresen Avatar
August 14, 2016 at 8:28 AM
- Demetrios, thank you for friendly visits a 7 and your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Flower Avatar
August 14, 2016 at 1:19 AM
I love the metaphor in general. And the simile it has applied especially on the line 2. ;)
Andresen Avatar
August 14, 2016 at 7:16 AM
- Moon Flower, thank you for the lovely comments and visits :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Y. Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 6:59 PM
Hi Anne-Lise, This is just beautiful: -) Alexis
Andresen Avatar
August 14, 2016 at 7:15 AM
- Alexis, thank you for the lovely comments and visits :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Godwin Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 5:13 PM
Lovely ... CayCay
Andresen Avatar
August 14, 2016 at 7:11 AM
- Thank you, C.C. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Turner Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 3:33 PM
I really like this one Anne-Lise. I have to agree with TJ. That last line sells it for me, but the entire poem is just wonderful.
Andresen Avatar
August 14, 2016 at 7:10 AM
- Thank you Daniel, for friendly visits and your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Leiser Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 2:43 PM
Lovely images are seen in your poem, Anne Lise! I enjoyed it very much:)
Andresen Avatar
August 14, 2016 at 7:08 AM
- Thank you for friendly visits and your comments, Laura :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 2:30 PM
Great imagery Anne Lise... I LOVE the line about the marble:-) hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 3:03 PM
- Thanks Jan for being wonderful - Thanks for being you :) - Just wanted to let you know how very much your thoughtfulness always is appreciated - hugs //Anne-Lise :)
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