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Glory of the Sun

Misty morning, foggy town Dense vapors floating around Tiny drops on screen door Pearls of moisture all over Humid air, sticky face Discomfort of dampness Magical moment walks in Transforms rapidly the dull scene Glories of the sun seep through Push away the blurred view Delighted grin welcomes the change Counts the blessings in exchange

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Date: 7/27/2023 3:26:00 PM
A lovely poem of contrasts, Smita....first stanza vis second stanza. The sun can be a magical mood-changer. ~ Regards // paul
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Smita Kulkarni
Date: 10/20/2023 12:42:00 PM
Thank you Paul!
Date: 7/27/2023 1:22:00 PM
Ahh!! Very descriptive and expressive work with such good flow and rhyme. The theme is very impressive. Thank you for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Smita Kulkarni
Date: 10/20/2023 12:42:00 PM
Thank you Sara!
Date: 7/26/2023 3:22:00 PM
Delightful as the morning. Much enjoyed the moments of joy you convey.
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Smita Kulkarni
Date: 10/20/2023 12:42:00 PM
Thanks Vijay!

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