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Glory of the Sun

Misty morning, foggy town
Dense vapors floating around
Tiny drops on screen door
Pearls of moisture all over
Humid air, sticky face
Discomfort of dampness

Magical moment walks in 
Transforms rapidly the dull scene 
Glories of the sun seep through
Push away the blurred view
Delighted grin welcomes the change
Counts the blessings in exchange

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Paul Callus

Date: 7/27/2023 3:26:00 PM

A lovely poem of contrasts, Smita....first stanza vis second stanza. The sun can be a magical mood-changer. ~ Regards // paul

Smita Kulkarni
Date: 10/20/2023 12:42:00 PM

Thank you Paul!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/27/2023 1:22:00 PM

Ahh!! Very descriptive and expressive work with such good flow and rhyme. The theme is very impressive. Thank you for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara

Smita Kulkarni
Date: 10/20/2023 12:42:00 PM

Thank you Sara!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/26/2023 3:22:00 PM

Delightful as the morning. Much enjoyed the moments of joy you convey.

Smita Kulkarni
Date: 10/20/2023 12:42:00 PM

Thanks Vijay!