Glory Days

He oozed charm, this aging lothario.
Gallantry was his middle name.
Yet, he lived in the past
in the glory days of football wins
and cheerleaders…
denying his saggy abdomen
blind eye, and fungus crusted feet…

Gallantry was his middle name
and he wheedled his way into the affections
of many lost and lonely woman.
When the only women 
of true importance in his life  
were his daughters…

He lived in the past
slept with his dog, and swam in Speedos
bald pate shining in the sun.   
Once, long ago he was married to a cheerleader.
She’s stopped cheering, as his life filled
with their daughter and she was no longer his girl.
Caught between life, death, 
and the deep blue sea, he swam.
Arriving at the home of each new prospective conquest
with the requisite flowers and small talk.

The glory days of football still danced
before his single good eye upon the giant bar screen,
where he served mimosa’s and other drinks with a wink.
He smiled with a well-worn charm, and didn’t touch the stuff.
Still, he tried. But, most times, 
he felt more at home
with his daughters…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 8/12/2011 1:12:00 AM
This is a great poem Deb. Don't know why it doesn't have more comments, but sometimes I think when they are put on makes a difference. I especeially like "caught between life, death--etc. " So, vivid and right on target. I've read it five or six times and it just gets better. I could have sworn I put a comment on it the other day. Maybe the virus ate it.
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Date: 8/7/2011 4:13:00 PM
Terrific write lovely Lady best to leave glory days long behind time to be a father and husband take care of the daughters
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 8/7/2011 4:16:00 PM
yah think???? why can't I find a GOOD man who GETS THAT???
Date: 8/7/2011 3:58:00 PM
A well told story written with good choice of words. Have a great day, Debbie
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