Glory

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Poetic Form: Quincrosticain

Inspired: 2023 September 26

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Contest Judged: 2023 October 08
Sponsored by: Andrea Dietrich

Image: Glory by Goonhammer

Pin de Wlsghk en ?? en 2023 | Lineas decorativas, Marcos para texto, Dibujos de labios

Gone are the days between the South and the North, Long be the battle of opposites. Old answers to youth with white versus black, and so forth. Red, white, and blue ... unravels true regrets. Young cast, aside from a few, a film the likes of Vonnegut's.

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/9/2023 8:16:00 AM

The days of "glory" eloquently expressed my dear sweet William. Vonnegut's work a fabulous story! Congratulations! :)

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/9/2023 1:58:00 PM

I extend my courtesies to you, Linda, for your pleasant consideration, and your noting my fave 'Slaughterhouse Five' writer. You are a blessing. Aloha, William

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/8/2023 11:42:00 AM

Hey, you are back!!! I think I have not seen you around here for a long time, unless I am confusing your name with someone else's. I had to look up who Vonnegut was, but I only saw he was a writer of satire. Anyway, Congrats. I love how you bolded the front part of each sentence, used interesting rhyme, and good punctuation.

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/8/2023 12:04:00 PM

Aloha, Andrea! I've written a more in-depth message answering your comment on my 'snowdrops' poem. When you have the chance, please read it. Vonnegut's 'Slaughterhouse-Five' was one of my fave books I've read, I think a movie was made. Anyhow, I'm glad to be back, with limited posting abilities aside from sessions/treatments still while in isolation. Many thanks and, Mahalo William