Glorious Red, Stunning Blue

Nothingness-
pure,
vibrant,
black-and-white.

Oh-
the brightest you say?

Oh-
elegant you believe?

Have you ever,
wished upon a star?

Constellations,
the true color,
of canvas,
that is the sky!

A dark sea,
black-and-white
twinkle,
light and bright.

Black-
White-
Oh!

Orion's belt....

A little to the left.

A little to the right.

True color,
in black-and-white.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
August 16, 2012 at 6:50 AM
Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Second Chance" contest Luis. Sorry for the belated congratulations but so much going on at this time. Love, Carol
Mac Donald Avatar
August 15, 2012 at 8:40 AM
Congratulations on your win, Luis. Enjoyed this write, prompted me to look up the Orion's Belt:) Thanks for sharing this astronmy delight! Mikki
Martinez-Rivera Avatar
August 15, 2012 at 11:13 PM
There is always a purpose to writing glad to see someone found one of them. :D one truly misses the beauty of the World when they don't stop to observe it.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
August 13, 2012 at 4:39 AM
Congratulations Luis xx
Williams Avatar
August 13, 2012 at 1:53 AM
Luis congrats on your win..David
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August 13, 2012 at 1:44 AM
HI LUIS,.congratulations with your awesome second chance poem. Thank you for the support..luv~PD
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