Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Sijo

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Glorious Field For Wedding Dreams - 7

GLORIOUS FIELD FOR WEDDING DREAMS - 7 

Red ~ yellow buds on summer-shine, green leaves sway free on clear blue skies
I, alone on the bench, holding my tears cause she said: "no". . .
Sunrise smile, stop the setting sun, when can I have wedding march?

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12:28 am. February 06, 2015

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Skat A February 15, 2015 at 10:42 PM Olive, Awesome take, Congrats in Andrea's Sijo contest. -- SKAT Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 3, 2015 at 4:09 AM thanks much Skat.. =)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma February 11, 2015 at 1:54 AM Such a sweet write dear Olive! Congrats on fine win! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 3, 2015 at 3:18 AM thanks much Dr. UPma. =)~

Sara Kendrick February 10, 2015 at 3:59 PM Very emotional approach to the contest..I could feel the pain..Enjoyed reading your winning work..Congrats..Sara Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 3, 2015 at 3:16 AM thanks much Sar.. =) g;ad you like my poem..

Jan Allison February 8, 2015 at 2:42 PM Dropping back with my congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 3, 2015 at 3:14 AM thanks much JAn.. =)!

Richard Lamoureux February 8, 2015 at 9:16 AM Wow, I love this one. I agree with Paul. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 3, 2015 at 3:11 AM thanks much Richard.. =)

Paul Callus February 8, 2015 at 8:01 AM Hi Olive_eloi....congrats on making it to the winners' list...although I expected this lovely write to finish higher up. hugs // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser February 26, 2015 at 11:13 AM thanks Paul.. :)

Andrea Dietrich February 8, 2015 at 1:23 AM This was sweet in such a melancholy way. Thanks for entering my contest. Soupmail. Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser February 26, 2015 at 11:12 AM thanks Andie.. :)

James Fraser February 5, 2015 at 3:45 PM Beautiful image with sadness fused, when will that Wedding March be, says she, to? - Fine Sijo Olive, good luck in the contest, James :) :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser February 7, 2015 at 9:02 AM thanks much JAmes.. :) appreciate your drop bys.. :D!

Paul Callus February 5, 2015 at 12:52 PM Very lovely and romantic, Olive_eloi! Wedding march? hmmm let me see my diary:)) hugs // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser February 6, 2015 at 5:27 AM hahahha Jan I am sure she will say alright.. :)! i don't think you don't have a diary PAul.. maybe a ----- you have, :D! Jan Allison February 6, 2015 at 5:10 AM Think Sheila may have something to say about that Paul lol:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Jan Allison February 5, 2015 at 10:40 AM absolutely divine imagery Olive - good luck in the contest;-) Hugs Jan xx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser February 6, 2015 at 5:08 AM thanks much Jan.. :)! weeeeeee, hugs and hugs.. I hope Andie will like mine.. :O!