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Gloomy Soldiers

Eyes like cynthia's brow starin beyond the cloud in a ruminative refine gaze indelliblely staring skyward the men of the shadow deviced it like a rustling of a dry leaf He has rustled up, and cross the rubicon.... Man is now cruel.. Man is bestial and blustery Man is now a canal beast.. O why ar you so cruel? Even to the unguilty Yes! He was not a hood you take even the unguilty when ravening like a wild beast... For who to take next In this gloomy world...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/6/2016 9:00:00 PM
love it, love it... LINDA
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Date: 6/4/2013 1:31:00 PM
FEEL IT BRO IT WORTH IT
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Date: 5/25/2013 10:35:00 AM
;-) Hi Andrew, Rustling of dry leaf's. gloomy imagery forsure!! seems as he has blame life over his ordeal... i like the title. it gave this raving solider a gloomy imagery through out the poem. ~SKAT
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Ad. Andrew Joseph
Date: 5/26/2013 10:17:00 AM
Tanx alot for ya comment....... I wrote the poem for a friend, that is now late, accidentially beaten to death by the cops.......

Book: Shattered Sighs