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Gloomy Skies

Falling hail Through the gloomy skies The dark clouds Formed beyond Alarming is the despair Crying with thunder Russell Sivey Form – Shadorma 3/5/3/3/7/5

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Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/12/2011 6:41:00 PM

Shadorma?? never heard of this type.....may have to try it!! Thanks for the inspiration.

Don Johnson

Date: 9/12/2011 1:29:00 AM

shades of grey make for a mind numbing day, sun comes you spring about...new mood made, i think i say... great poem mate...

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/12/2011 1:00:00 AM

I haven't seen this form before, Russell, but the image you created sets quite a mood. Sometimes it's hard to rid ourselves of those "gloomy skies" that seem to follow us in an alarming way. Love, Carolyn