Joanna Daniel Poet Monorhyme

Gloomy

It’s a gloomy day ~
All the clouds are grey
They seem in dismay
Sun’s not come to play
The wind does not stay
The leaves do not sway
No charming display
A drudging weekday
What do they convey?
 ~ It’s a gloomy day



written on 08.17.2021

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Scott Thirtyseven August 22, 2021 at 3:52 PM Had a few of those days recently. They were cold enough, and now your words are sending a chill of their own.

Anisha Dutta August 21, 2021 at 11:00 PM Gloomy Day is my most disliking. Welcome ! Every day Sun must send its ray I earnestly pray.

Harry Horsman August 20, 2021 at 7:22 PM Love your monorhyme, Jo

Virginia Gelok August 19, 2021 at 7:06 PM I like this poem. I like that every line rhymes. I like the story it tells. So now I see this is monorhyme. I must try this.

Vijay Pandit August 19, 2021 at 5:50 AM The day sure looks gloomy in your photo. Well described in monorhymes, Jo.

Caren Krutsinger August 19, 2021 at 4:41 AM Marvelous monorhyme Jo. It flows well.

Supraja Kannan August 19, 2021 at 1:58 AM Nice one, Jo...

Victor Buhagiar August 19, 2021 at 1:24 AM Light and pleasant poem, Jo. Best for a win. Hugs.