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Gloomy

It’s a gloomy day ~ All the clouds are grey They seem in dismay Sun’s not come to play The wind does not stay The leaves do not sway No charming display A drudging weekday What do they convey? ~ It’s a gloomy day written on 08.17.2021

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Date: 8/22/2021 3:52:00 PM
Had a few of those days recently. They were cold enough, and now your words are sending a chill of their own.
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Date: 8/21/2021 11:00:00 PM
Gloomy Day is my most disliking. Welcome ! Every day Sun must send its ray I earnestly pray.
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Date: 8/20/2021 7:22:00 PM
Love your monorhyme, Jo
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Date: 8/19/2021 7:06:00 PM
I like this poem. I like that every line rhymes. I like the story it tells. So now I see this is monorhyme. I must try this.
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Date: 8/19/2021 5:50:00 AM
The day sure looks gloomy in your photo. Well described in monorhymes, Jo.
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Date: 8/19/2021 4:41:00 AM
Marvelous monorhyme Jo. It flows well.
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Date: 8/19/2021 1:58:00 AM
Nice one, Jo...
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Date: 8/19/2021 1:24:00 AM
Light and pleasant poem, Jo. Best for a win. Hugs.
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