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Gloom of Ash

weeps the sliced moon...

her cold gloom, like

pale tomb of ash



Trinity Contest of DebbieGuzzi
by nette onclaud

sadspacethan-bauk

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Poet Destroyer A

November 10, 2012 at 6:04 PM

NETTE...LOVE YOUR WIN...PD

Andrea Dietrich

November 8, 2012 at 11:41 PM

Love the OO sounds going on in this one! Congrats on the win, Nette.

Debbie Guzzi

November 8, 2012 at 3:22 PM

The ever facinating moon! Than-Bauk is an unusual form and I appreciated the re-visit to it, good on you nette! Congrad's on Your Win! Light & Love

Anne-Lise Andresen

November 8, 2012 at 3:10 PM

Congratulations on your winning poems in the "Trinity" contest - well done Nette - Huggs / / Anne-Lise :)

Barbara Gorelick

November 8, 2012 at 11:42 AM

Well done Nette...congrats. BG

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

November 8, 2012 at 8:46 AM

Congratulations on your fine win xx

Carol Sunshine Brown

November 8, 2012 at 8:29 AM

Congratulations on your win Nette. Love, Carol

Bl Devnath

November 4, 2012 at 7:07 AM

Excellent poem enjoyed carries a beautiful picture. Good luck. Loved always, bl

Harry Horsman

November 3, 2012 at 9:46 AM

wow, this is chilly, yet written with a warm heart...

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

November 3, 2012 at 8:05 AM

Moon has never been sadder than this, nette, !! Jag

Kash Poet

November 3, 2012 at 6:56 AM

You nailed it perfectly!Must be for Debbie's contest.I am also thinking of a Thank Bauk.

Len Gasun

November 2, 2012 at 10:24 PM

This is an outstanding write my friend, nette! I can vividly see the picture and feel the deep emotions here. By the way, is this for the contest? Thank you for sharing and I wish you all the best and luck! Have a blessed day always in sunshine! love/hugs:)LG/ Norie

Richard Lamoureux

November 2, 2012 at 5:10 PM

You must have been looking out side last night. This is a perfect description.

Anne-Lise Andresen

November 2, 2012 at 1:50 PM

Very well written Nette. - Have a lovely weekend - - / / Anne-Lise :)

Russell Sivey

November 2, 2012 at 1:26 PM

What a sombre poem you have written my friend! I really enjoyed reading this wondrous and incredible piece this afternoon! What a fantastic resemblance of gloom the moon is! And it does seem like the moon is weeping, always depressing when it's ashen! You are quite the masterful poet Nette! I love your work, Awesome Job!!