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Glittery Story

Tell me this tale of the sun flash Across your face, too hot, harsh, Your candid stories like fairy tales; To ears harrass our illumined faces, Indeed. I learn laughter's lofty gales. I will stare at your straight visage- Water and steel of similar, sly page, Smooth, flawless in its frank portrayal Of myself. I should know how rumpled Water grow into ripples of a storied age. Yet you Mirror, is yet so smooth; A worthy canvas, a brushes' tooth, Fluffy. You narrate my falls and glory In solemn reflective manner, yours only. I'm humbled by your simlple, arcane story.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/9/2012 6:35:00 PM
a great piece to start reading your soul here in the soup. love the last stanza, well-penned indeed
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Date: 1/5/2012 11:47:00 AM
Congrats on your win in the "Glow Of Glitter" contest Onyebuchi. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/31/2011 10:42:00 PM
Nice write,Buchi or Ozone.Congratulations on your win....Happy New Year ,Brother....
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Date: 12/31/2011 12:47:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this piece Onybuchi, and all good wishes on the spot achived..!
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Date: 12/30/2011 2:47:00 PM
Onyebuchi, Beauty visage of poetry.Happy New year to you and congratulations on a worthy poem's place victory. Agape, Moses
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Date: 12/30/2011 11:10:00 AM
Such description you use. Very unique, Onyebuchi. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 12/30/2011 10:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 11/12/2011 8:41:00 PM
O.O.,,.. Enjoyed your poem~ Thank you for sharing. Have yourself a wonderful night.. Take care ;-) ..LINDA
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Date: 11/12/2011 7:49:00 AM
I only hope to be criticized, I only dream to be corrected.........
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