Glitter

The night had something to say, Something that would make my day, The blanket of studded glitter, Gave me hopes in the form of rays, The pleasure for what no one could pay, I saw it there, The most beautiful sky, I say!

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/27/2016 5:33:00 PM

Kirthi,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@"

Michael Whatley

Date: 5/9/2016 8:53:00 AM

Lovely unique piece, Kirthi - and a warm belated welcome to PoetrySoup. Make yourself at home here, meet lots of wonderful people, and always continue to express yourself. ~Michael

Manmath Dalei

Date: 4/26/2016 11:27:00 PM

Hi Kirthi, Nice & amazing first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Wish u a successful journey ahead........hugs

Kirthi Pillai
Date: 5/3/2016 8:13:00 AM

Thank you so much :) XOXO